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Bite my lip
I swallow my pride
While you swallow me whole
I swallow my words
While you swallow my soul
Please tread lightly
I might need it back
After you have used me
I might be lack
ing
Of water, I'm thirsty
Of food, I am hungry
Of love, so please hold me
I'm just a sex junkie
Don't disregard me
Although I am fading
My mind you violate
My body you're shading
Kiss me
Once
Gently
Goodbye
While you swallow me whole
I swallow my words
While you swallow my soul
Please tread lightly
I might need it back
After you have used me
I might be lack
ing
Of water, I'm thirsty
Of food, I am hungry
Of love, so please hold me
I'm just a sex junkie
Don't disregard me
Although I am fading
My mind you violate
My body you're shading
Kiss me
Once
Gently
Goodbye
Published 25th Apr 2018
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Great opening verse Amanacer, it couldn't be better. The 2nd verse needs some work maybe but the rest of the poem is adequate. Stunning 1st verse though; really liked it. :-)
Something like this maybe for that 2nd verse:
Please tread lightly
I might need it back
After you've used me
This judgement I lack
Something like this maybe for that 2nd verse:
Please tread lightly
I might need it back
After you've used me
This judgement I lack
