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kissing in the sun lit rain
Starving on this island
Intense longing for our souls entwined
Wishing your body was not only in my mind
A distance from you, I just can no longer bear
Into the sunset that draws you to me, I will stare
Moving all mountain, water and sky in my way
Only the space between us is now in play
A way to now find, my soul must relay
My passion's pathway
To your wet kiss...
Intense longing for our souls entwined
Wishing your body was not only in my mind
A distance from you, I just can no longer bear
Into the sunset that draws you to me, I will stare
Moving all mountain, water and sky in my way
Only the space between us is now in play
A way to now find, my soul must relay
My passion's pathway
To your wet kiss...
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 22nd Apr 2018
| Edited 1st May 2018
Author's Note
overwhelming passionate longing to taste my lover's essence...
picture: Wang Li Ching
picture: Wang Li Ching
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Re. kissing in the sun lite rain
22nd Apr 2018 8:55pm
Wow ... this is wonderful... so full of longing and desire ..: feel each line ...
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Re: Re. kissing in the sun lite rain
22nd Apr 2018 9:01pm
the nice ones fall from the sky...so glad you enjoyed the little diddie
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
Love love love this...
This is really so much passion...oh my heart....I bet this is your most passionate work ever.
I can feel every word with your love my dear Jeff :)))
love always
Jasmine
This is really so much passion...oh my heart....I bet this is your most passionate work ever.
I can feel every word with your love my dear Jeff :)))
love always
Jasmine
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Re: Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
24th Apr 2018 4:29am
Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
Anonymous
24th Apr 2018 1:04am
A beautiful and breathtaking piece of ink, Jeff...just gorgeous!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
24th Apr 2018 4:30am
thank you so much for the love on my little poem...I really appreciate the read my sweet friend...the poem is for real
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
Anonymous
5th May 2018 6:13pm
oh my heavenly goodness, how delicious and delicate
💕
💕
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Re: Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
6th May 2018 00:07am
thanks you so much my lovely friend...I meant the poem
love always
Jeff
love always
Jeff
Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
8th May 2018 4:03am
I must also say this a sweet lil' piece!
A work that could Only truly derive from true sweetened heart of love !
Passion well portrayed indeed.
H
A work that could Only truly derive from true sweetened heart of love !
Passion well portrayed indeed.
H
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Re: Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
8th May 2018 7:25pm
a very loving compliment...I hope I have such a heart
thank you my sweeten-heart-yourself
Jeff
thank you my sweeten-heart-yourself
Jeff
Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
18th May 2018 7:45pm
Re: Re. kissing in the sun lit rain
18th May 2018 8:16pm
thanks for the read....alas, i must speak of the kiss...since it is part of the title in this case and my solo intent...
take care
Jeff
take care
Jeff