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when you're around
what is it
that
when you're around
everything becomes meaningful
and
meaningless
at the same time
when you're around
even the scariest masks you put on
evoke the deepest of joys
for what the eye sees
becomes irrelevant
as the heart becomes the single
source of all the senses
the sight the touch the smell
the taste
and more
and they say
that is a case
of mind over matter
how stupid
can't you see
it is a case
of heart over matter
not the mind
for the mind surrenders
all responsibilty
to the heart
when you're around
when you're around
nothing else matters
and
desolation
is an entire universe away
and when you're not around
it somehow
becomes everything
and everything
becomes it
i don't know the answer
to this why
the same everything
is
not the same
anymore
when you're around
and
when you're not around
Published 22nd Apr 2018
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22nd Apr 2018 1:24pm
22nd Apr 2018 2:19pm
Welcome
is the visit of the Poet Admired.
Welcome
is the review.
overjoyed is the reaction of the inker.
humbled.
is the visit of the Poet Admired.
Welcome
is the review.
overjoyed is the reaction of the inker.
humbled.
A beautiful tribute to one that makes life more bearable
and brings sunshine through the darkest clouds.
And the why.......we will never know, for the heart is incapable
of thought, and the mind, unable to feel, but the soul knows,
for it is the part that holds the key to both.
This describes those feelings so well. Thank you for such a
heartfelt read, C_f.
and brings sunshine through the darkest clouds.
And the why.......we will never know, for the heart is incapable
of thought, and the mind, unable to feel, but the soul knows,
for it is the part that holds the key to both.
This describes those feelings so well. Thank you for such a
heartfelt read, C_f.
22nd Apr 2018 2:24pm
what a poem-
an honor - getting such a poem as a review dear Friend Teri!!
yes!
we will never know why...
perhaps the soul hides something from both
the heart
and the mind.
honored and humbled
at the same
and both deeply so.
welcome
is The Friend Admired.
Welcome
is the honor!!
appreciation
beyond words!!
an honor - getting such a poem as a review dear Friend Teri!!
yes!
we will never know why...
perhaps the soul hides something from both
the heart
and the mind.
honored and humbled
at the same
and both deeply so.
welcome
is The Friend Admired.
Welcome
is the honor!!
appreciation
beyond words!!
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
22nd Apr 2018 2:49pm
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welcome
is the Poet admired.
welcome
is the review generous.
as fellow inkers, i believe we all do the same i.e. oblige and take the pen when the poem dictates itself. same is the case here, about missing dear friends, across the life- the feeling felt, of desolation when they're not around. the special ones- whom we only see through the eyes of the heart and oblivious to what the world thinks or sees or doesn't see in them. And that's the reason, doesn't matter what phase of life they're going through or how they project themselves due to the times, we know who and what they are, hence everything else becomes irrelevant.
for example- few friends put some grotesque yet artistic avatars for some times, yet the sight always regardless of the avatars- always invokes the same joy!! and that was just a small example i say!
utterly humbled yet deeply honored- the feeling here upon your kind and generous review dear friend!!
appreciation
beyond words!!
:-)
is the Poet admired.
welcome
is the review generous.
as fellow inkers, i believe we all do the same i.e. oblige and take the pen when the poem dictates itself. same is the case here, about missing dear friends, across the life- the feeling felt, of desolation when they're not around. the special ones- whom we only see through the eyes of the heart and oblivious to what the world thinks or sees or doesn't see in them. And that's the reason, doesn't matter what phase of life they're going through or how they project themselves due to the times, we know who and what they are, hence everything else becomes irrelevant.
for example- few friends put some grotesque yet artistic avatars for some times, yet the sight always regardless of the avatars- always invokes the same joy!! and that was just a small example i say!
utterly humbled yet deeply honored- the feeling here upon your kind and generous review dear friend!!
appreciation
beyond words!!
:-)
22nd Apr 2018 8:08pm
why should one ever know the answer to such beauteously felt heartfeltness...streams straight n touches in radiant rays..the questions n answers are for the minded minds ..n how refreshing it feels that minded darkness is not talked upon here...just bountiful light faith n all the goodness.. beautiful offering this one dear poet capturing the alchemy 'when you're around'
light n luv..write on:)
light n luv..write on:)
25th Apr 2018 11:34am
welcome
is the Artist Admired.
welcome
is the insight enlightening
true. i never thought about the needlessness of the answer, my goodness. Some insight there.
utterly humbled at the review, dear friend. wide grins and deep joy- the reaction of the humbled inker.
apprecation
deep. immense!!
is the Artist Admired.
welcome
is the insight enlightening
true. i never thought about the needlessness of the answer, my goodness. Some insight there.
utterly humbled at the review, dear friend. wide grins and deep joy- the reaction of the humbled inker.
apprecation
deep. immense!!
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2018 9:50pm
There is
nothing cold
or
infused
about this stunning ... STUNNING
piece;
this delves
far beyond
it`s meaning;
there is so much
magisterial`ism
I
am
speechless
lefe
xXmuahXx
25th Apr 2018 11:37am
welcome
is the Poet Admired
welcome
is the review affectionate.
my. oh. my.
well, dear friend..look closer
it is but a cold truth
about the cold felt
when
"you're not around' -my friends
chuffed. griining. humbled. and uterly so
is what i am.
joy. overjoyed.
is the reaction.
appreciation
immense
appreciation
intense!!
is the Poet Admired
welcome
is the review affectionate.
my. oh. my.
well, dear friend..look closer
it is but a cold truth
about the cold felt
when
"you're not around' -my friends
chuffed. griining. humbled. and uterly so
is what i am.
joy. overjoyed.
is the reaction.
appreciation
immense
appreciation
intense!!
23rd Apr 2018 4:32am
Never thought the conundrum of every circling thoughts could be captured with such gracious beauty, doesn't seem quite so intimidating now,these thoughts. Mad Mad Respect,
Survivor
Survivor
25th Apr 2018 11:40am
welcome
is the Poet admired.
welcome
is the review gracious.
well, dear friend
it is simply but a humble attempt at describing the feeling felt, the peer found it captured enough to convey what meant is but a source of deep honor and joy.
humbled. and deeply so.
by the affection and the beauty in the eyes of the beholders here.
appreciation
beyond words!!
is the Poet admired.
welcome
is the review gracious.
well, dear friend
it is simply but a humble attempt at describing the feeling felt, the peer found it captured enough to convey what meant is but a source of deep honor and joy.
humbled. and deeply so.
by the affection and the beauty in the eyes of the beholders here.
appreciation
beyond words!!
26th Apr 2018 9:23pm
27th Apr 2018 2:32pm
welcome
once again
is the peer!
welcome
is the review, kind!
appreciation
held close.
once again
is the peer!
welcome
is the review, kind!
appreciation
held close.
