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Jesus comes (a carol)
He has not wings or halo bright
but endows us with a sense of wrong and right
the advent candle lights the road to town
the before Christ is counting down
Chorus
(the lord is welcome here today
raise your voice and sing his praise
Prophets predictions coming true
enlightenment for me and you
raise your voice and sing his praise
the lord is welcome here today)
the birth joy time hands to all mankind
a comet flies across the sky's
kings on knees before him pray
bring him gifts that each discerned
gold, frankincense and myrrh
Chorus
livestock look on as glory shines
beliefs. new testament opening lines
our Saviour born immaculate
embrace his love don't hesitate
embrace his love don't hesitate
warm Christmas faith that glows divine
Chorus
but endows us with a sense of wrong and right
the advent candle lights the road to town
the before Christ is counting down
Chorus
(the lord is welcome here today
raise your voice and sing his praise
Prophets predictions coming true
enlightenment for me and you
raise your voice and sing his praise
the lord is welcome here today)
the birth joy time hands to all mankind
a comet flies across the sky's
kings on knees before him pray
bring him gifts that each discerned
gold, frankincense and myrrh
Chorus
livestock look on as glory shines
beliefs. new testament opening lines
our Saviour born immaculate
embrace his love don't hesitate
embrace his love don't hesitate
warm Christmas faith that glows divine
Chorus
Published 19th Apr 2018
| Edited 9th Dec 2021
Author's Note
just thought would write a carol from a non believer
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That's a very interesting concept. I like it, though. Would you sing this like how church hymns are all long and drug out and deep? Like, where you would raise your hands in the sky and basically bellow? I know how they sing in churches haha... I sang it like that.
I don't know about how any of us got here and don't believe anyone truly does, but I really enjoyed the concept you've done here. A non-believer carol, that is. It gave me about fifteen minutes of thought now.
I don't know about how any of us got here and don't believe anyone truly does, but I really enjoyed the concept you've done here. A non-believer carol, that is. It gave me about fifteen minutes of thought now.
20th Apr 2018 8:36am
great feedback .I love singing along to great carols I believe the quote is why should the Devil have all the best songs (tunes) If anybody wants to colab and set some music I would be only to pleased
