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I Am Your Canvas
I'm
your canvas
my love ... use
only the bright, vibrant colors
of our passion as your palette,
outline me with the blackest
of black to keep me safe within your gaze,
the heat of your beating heart
for the red lusciousness of my lips,
brush the canvas of my skin a hue matching your soft magical touch residing therein,
paint my large brown eyes with the earthiness of your scent,
sprinkle flecks of gold in my eyes to reflect my desire for you shining through,
splash my cheeks rose petal
pink for the look of satisfaction
your love fills me with
color me ...
Radiant!
your canvas
my love ... use
only the bright, vibrant colors
of our passion as your palette,
outline me with the blackest
of black to keep me safe within your gaze,
the heat of your beating heart
for the red lusciousness of my lips,
brush the canvas of my skin a hue matching your soft magical touch residing therein,
paint my large brown eyes with the earthiness of your scent,
sprinkle flecks of gold in my eyes to reflect my desire for you shining through,
splash my cheeks rose petal
pink for the look of satisfaction
your love fills me with
color me ...
Radiant!
Published 19th Apr 2018
Author's Note
Simply what the artwork gave me.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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19th Apr 2018 6:08pm
19th Apr 2018 7:14pm
Thank you so kindly for giving of your time to leave such a lovely review 🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
Always
Justafan
~M~
19th Apr 2018 6:46pm
Acrylic red rose,
built with boarders to confine and be kept to ones self.
tasty texture tumbling right off the brush.
bring smiles and satisfaction falling to knees.
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you paint sexual allure Justafan18
well done.
great love poem.
built with boarders to confine and be kept to ones self.
tasty texture tumbling right off the brush.
bring smiles and satisfaction falling to knees.
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you paint sexual allure Justafan18
well done.
great love poem.
19th Apr 2018 7:13pm
I’m flattered and blushing here a bit, by your lovely review of my writing!
Big smile
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Big smile
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
19th Apr 2018 7:08pm
19th Apr 2018 7:10pm
Hello gawgeous, thank you for giving me a read and taking the time to leave a review!
I will now return the favor :)
Always
Justafan
I will now return the favor :)
Always
Justafan
19th Apr 2018 7:14pm
Fan, this is a beautifully written, romantic piece. I like the subtle sensuality and the painting metaphor. Brava!
19th Apr 2018 7:38pm
Goodness me, you really are making my day here!!
Thank you very very much for sharing your time with me today 🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
Thank you very very much for sharing your time with me today 🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
Anonymous
20th Apr 2018 1:17am
What gorgeous imagery. A delight to my senses!
Well done.
Well done.
20th Apr 2018 5:04am
I really appreciate you taking your precious time to read and review my work 🌹
Always
Justafan
Always
Justafan
20th Apr 2018 5:22am
20th Apr 2018 5:25am
I’m delighted you found this to your liking :)
Thank you for reading and letting me know your thoughts 🌹
Always
Justafan
Thank you for reading and letting me know your thoughts 🌹
Always
Justafan
20th Apr 2018 6:06am
Such a radiant write... well done :) I found myself looking closer at the picture and re-reading it
I loved these lines:
"the heat of your beating heart
for the red lusciousness of my lips"
as well as the last stanza
"splash my cheeks rose petal
pink for the look of satisfaction
your love fills me with"
and the ending tied it together nicely. You are a delight to read!
~Rosegold
I loved these lines:
"the heat of your beating heart
for the red lusciousness of my lips"
as well as the last stanza
"splash my cheeks rose petal
pink for the look of satisfaction
your love fills me with"
and the ending tied it together nicely. You are a delight to read!
~Rosegold
21st Apr 2018 12:48pm
I am so flattered by your comments 🌹
Thank you for sharing a few minutes of your time with me :)
Always
Justafan
Thank you for sharing a few minutes of your time with me :)
Always
Justafan
20th Apr 2018 12:15pm
"passion as your pallet" ... sweet alliteration ... "outline me with the blackest/of black to keep me safe from your gaze" ... "Splash my cheeks rose petal/pink for the look of satisfaction/your love fills me with" ... favorite lines ... then you bring it home ... "color me ... double line break ... "radiant" Awesome cadence and flow with this ... got me longing ... daydreaming to feel this way
21st Apr 2018 12:51pm
LDF, I hope you are enjoying your retreat, first thing, now to tell you how your review made me ...smile!
Always
~M~
Always
~M~
21st Apr 2018 7:57am
Simply put , as others have spoken well here ;
Well done and spoken , and the image you create with the
words , does not even need the image you have posted , for
me to *see* the radiance...yet the picture does your words justice...
And , this phrase :
"outline me with the blackest
of black to keep me safe within your gaze"
Yes , black can do that , and more...
Yet consider the rainbow , and when it is shown against a dark sky background ,
the colors at the right angle , are much brighter...another way of seeing that , is
when many of us were in grade school , we colored paper with a bright array of
the color spectrum , the covered it with black , and scratched out our images...
And the spectrum shone through so brightly...
Sometimes , in relationships , love draws the brightest colors out from a darker background !
Best to you !
You know I like your writing , and that it comes from a good hearted soul...:)
Well done and spoken , and the image you create with the
words , does not even need the image you have posted , for
me to *see* the radiance...yet the picture does your words justice...
And , this phrase :
"outline me with the blackest
of black to keep me safe within your gaze"
Yes , black can do that , and more...
Yet consider the rainbow , and when it is shown against a dark sky background ,
the colors at the right angle , are much brighter...another way of seeing that , is
when many of us were in grade school , we colored paper with a bright array of
the color spectrum , the covered it with black , and scratched out our images...
And the spectrum shone through so brightly...
Sometimes , in relationships , love draws the brightest colors out from a darker background !
Best to you !
You know I like your writing , and that it comes from a good hearted soul...:)
21st Apr 2018 12:55pm
You know your reviews always bring a smile!
Thank you for being a name I look forward to seeing in reviews🌹
Always
Justafan of yours
~M~
Thank you for being a name I look forward to seeing in reviews🌹
Always
Justafan of yours
~M~
