deepundergroundpoetry.com

Water - Part Two

I feel like I am moving,
Closer to the water's edge.
I can now touch the bottom,
and I cannot move or swim.
I am living, I am coughing.
The water is not over my head.
I am no longer falling under,
the water is not touching me.
I am breathing, I am moving,
and I am not by myself.
I am barely breathing,
And I am holding on.
I am no longer freezing
there is something warming me.
I am seeing, I am smiling,
and I can now show the truth.
I am speaking, I am explaining,
and now the truth is told.
I can feel my blood rushing,
knowing someone has helped me breathe.
I had my life saved today,
there is an angel watching over me.
Written by cheesyemoheart (Emilie Turner)
Published
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2 reading list entries 0
comments 3 reads 697
Commenting Preference: 
The author is looking for friendly feedback.

Latest Forum Discussions
SPEAKEASY
Today 3:54am by Ahavati
SPEAKEASY
Today 3:09am by Ahavati
SPEAKEASY
Today 2:58am by Ahavati
SPEAKEASY
Yesterday 11:16pm by ajay
POETRY
Yesterday 9:32pm by James_A_Knight
COMPETITIONS
Yesterday 8:11pm by Mstrmnd1923