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Water - Part Two

I feel like I am moving,
Closer to the water's edge.
I can now touch the bottom,
and I cannot move or swim.
I am living, I am coughing.
The water is not over my head.
I am no longer falling under,
the water is not touching me.
I am breathing, I am moving,
and I am not by myself.
I am barely breathing,
And I am holding on.
I am no longer freezing
there is something warming me.
I am seeing, I am smiling,
and I can now show the truth.
I am speaking, I am explaining,
and now the truth is told.
I can feel my blood rushing,
knowing someone has helped me breathe.
I had my life saved today,
there is an angel watching over me.
Written by cheesyemoheart (Emilie Turner)
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