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Seduced
you know what you've got
you know how to use it
to get my attention
and never to lose it
your innocent smile
your gaze penetrating
into my heart
which has been waiting
to feel the right mix
of passsion and fire
each movement you make
stirs my desire
your clothes and your curves
subtly revealing
the promise of more
you're so appealing
your touch as you brush
against me in passing
sensations then rush
growing and lasting
a kiss from your lips
fingers exploring
each moment with you
I am adoring
you know how to use it
to get my attention
and never to lose it
your innocent smile
your gaze penetrating
into my heart
which has been waiting
to feel the right mix
of passsion and fire
each movement you make
stirs my desire
your clothes and your curves
subtly revealing
the promise of more
you're so appealing
your touch as you brush
against me in passing
sensations then rush
growing and lasting
a kiss from your lips
fingers exploring
each moment with you
I am adoring
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Re. Seduced
18th Apr 2018 3:28pm
Yep, this is quite a professional piece and a striking statement of desire, of which there can be no mistake. It all fits well within the rhyme, the rhythm's excellent too.
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Re: Re. Seduced
19th Apr 2018 1:40am
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19th Apr 2018 1:40am
Re. Seduced
18th Apr 2018 8:51pm
Great poem. bc. Subtle touches and glances are what get our hearts pumping at the prospect of seeing more, rather than the act itself of seeing more.
Well done!
Well done!
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Re: Re. Seduced
18th Apr 2018 9:48pm
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Anonymous
19th Apr 2018 00:48am
Sweet and alluring and you sound like you are almost singing it or with the music you chose. Very nice. :)
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19th Apr 2018 1:42am