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Come To Me
I lie here tonight
thinking of the last time
I savored the taste
The aroma …that is you
The firmness that you
Show to the world
Attempting to hide the
Softness within
But, I’ve seen through
The dark richness ...
The ripples etched into
Your outer shell
I’ve tasted the delicious
Creamy taste you try to hide
On the
Inside
I need you now
Here, beside me
To make the
Blackness of the night …less
Come …I invite you to my lips
Feel my teeth nibble
Away the rough outer shell
That is you
Feel my tongue
As I lick
The creaminess
I find inside
YES
OH YESSSSSSSSSSS
I LOVE YOU
MY DEAR SWEET …OREO!
Published 17th Apr 2018
Author's Note
I wrote this as a challenge from another poet ... to write erotica about a food. Hope you get hungry!! I decided to post with Warning because it’s suggestive!
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17th Apr 2018 7:20pm
This is great. I've done one a while ago about an oreo...I believe yours tops it
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/261689-pull-me-apart/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/261689-pull-me-apart/
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18th Apr 2018 7:50pm
Such a sexy sensual build up with this one ... I know it's about the cookie ... but I also kept flashing back and forth to a strapping black stud ... filled with thick white cream
18th Apr 2018 8:42pm
19th Apr 2018 7:24pm
Fan, you've captured well the allure a long loved cookie. Food can be a very sensual device. Brava!
