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Pleasing and Teasing
Enter my domain of endless teasing.
I hope you find my caverns pleasing,
My courtier spells tranquilizing.
Every touch and look be teasing,
Silk ribbons be easing,
Soon you will be seizing.
The game starts with teasing,
But always ends with pleasing.
I hope you find my caverns pleasing,
My courtier spells tranquilizing.
Every touch and look be teasing,
Silk ribbons be easing,
Soon you will be seizing.
The game starts with teasing,
But always ends with pleasing.
Author's Note
Inspired by a triolet form.
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- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
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15th Apr 2018 12:41pm
Thank you, I love working with a structure it makes the work more beautiful and me think longer on the words i say.
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23rd Apr 2018 4:20pm
thank you. It has taken quite a while to get to this point of being able to actually use words. Keep up writing and welcome to DU.
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