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Wanting
You seduced me with your words
Now, I'm hungry for you
A hunger
Only you can satisfy
Your name in messages
Causes my blood to quicken
Would you care if you knew?
Would you want me too?
Would you want to know that I touch myself,
While looking at your picture?
My nipples hard
My G-spot throbbing
There is nothing I wouldn't do ...for you
Fantasy to the 10th power
All mine ...and yours
If
You
Want
It!
Now, I'm hungry for you
A hunger
Only you can satisfy
Your name in messages
Causes my blood to quicken
Would you care if you knew?
Would you want me too?
Would you want to know that I touch myself,
While looking at your picture?
My nipples hard
My G-spot throbbing
There is nothing I wouldn't do ...for you
Fantasy to the 10th power
All mine ...and yours
If
You
Want
It!
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
14th Apr 2018 7:24pm
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Re. Wanting
14th Apr 2018 7:29pm
Re. Wanting
14th Apr 2018 9:06pm
Hot write my dear ... love the play with final lines ... the indentation and slant
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Re: Re. Wanting
14th Apr 2018 9:52pm
Re. Wanting
14th Apr 2018 11:52pm
Ah , The Seduction By Words , Enraptured Consciousness ,
Captured By Beat , And Rhythm , Stirring Thought And Memory ,
Creating Fires In The Flesh , And Desire In Mind And Loins ,
Pounding Pulsations Of Pleasure And Passion Intimate
With The Need To Satiate What Aches Between The Legs
And This Rose , This Lily Of The Valley , This Petaled Flower
Curled Around The Stamen , Enveloping , Moist With Her
Morning Dew , And Bathed In Her Waterfall , Would It Flow
Faster And Sweeter Still If There Were Whispers Of Love ?
Shall We Fan The Flames , Into A Roaring Feline Inferno ?
Very Well Done , My Dear
Would You Be Interested In A Collaboration ?
Captured By Beat , And Rhythm , Stirring Thought And Memory ,
Creating Fires In The Flesh , And Desire In Mind And Loins ,
Pounding Pulsations Of Pleasure And Passion Intimate
With The Need To Satiate What Aches Between The Legs
And This Rose , This Lily Of The Valley , This Petaled Flower
Curled Around The Stamen , Enveloping , Moist With Her
Morning Dew , And Bathed In Her Waterfall , Would It Flow
Faster And Sweeter Still If There Were Whispers Of Love ?
Shall We Fan The Flames , Into A Roaring Feline Inferno ?
Very Well Done , My Dear
Would You Be Interested In A Collaboration ?
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Re: Re. Wanting
15th Apr 2018 2:32pm
Wolfie, your review was magical! Thank you for reading my work.
I would love to work with you on something :)
Always
Justafan18
I would love to work with you on something :)
Always
Justafan18
Re: Re. Wanting
15th Apr 2018 2:33pm
Re. Wanting
15th Apr 2018 4:51pm
This is a sentiment I understand very well. You strung all the right thoughts and words together. Wonderful!!
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
16th Apr 2018 7:22pm
<< post removed >>
Re. Wanting
1st May 2018 4:52pm
just watch your lovely red rose
from all angles
it depicts roundness
gals pink beauty
and
the male lips
at the tips
use imagery only
and
it gives life to the erotica
just read by me
not many could have seen
you may draw their attention
ROSE
is always a bone of contention
Your Rose reminds all
that in life
a ROSE alone
is A ROSE for all
give it any name
ere one's fall
from all angles
it depicts roundness
gals pink beauty
and
the male lips
at the tips
use imagery only
and
it gives life to the erotica
just read by me
not many could have seen
you may draw their attention
ROSE
is always a bone of contention
Your Rose reminds all
that in life
a ROSE alone
is A ROSE for all
give it any name
ere one's fall
1
Re. Wanting
2nd May 2018 10:01pm
Re. Wanting
6th May 2018 4:33am
I just saw a sweet little chick
feeding her second small baby
and the bigger toddler was running about
being chased by his father
it often happened to me
my eyes could not but watch her smile
she was just sitting opposite me
they all kissed each other and parted
then she also got up and smiled
gave me a parting one
may be openly
said to me smilingly
pop some other time
could it ever be
feeding her second small baby
and the bigger toddler was running about
being chased by his father
it often happened to me
my eyes could not but watch her smile
she was just sitting opposite me
they all kissed each other and parted
then she also got up and smiled
gave me a parting one
may be openly
said to me smilingly
pop some other time
could it ever be
1