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Heart Strings
Fingers playing gently
Sliding along the scale of my body
Create beautiful music
Soft vibrato movements
Leave me trembling
With desire
Sharp staccato touches
Designed to bring me
To full crescendo
You play the strings
Of my body and soul
Like a master musician.
Play on
Sliding along the scale of my body
Create beautiful music
Soft vibrato movements
Leave me trembling
With desire
Sharp staccato touches
Designed to bring me
To full crescendo
You play the strings
Of my body and soul
Like a master musician.
Play on
Published 13th Apr 2018
Author's Note
I actually write ekphractic poetry, which is based on a picture or work of art, but no place to add the picture that was the muse for this work.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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13th Apr 2018 5:33pm
Awesome piece Justafan18
i love the symphonic feel of this poem.
the cello/violin essence lingering.
i really dig that second stanza
"Soft vibrato movements
Leave me trembling
With desire "
i actually wrote a ekphractic poem today based off of Gustave Doré's paintings.
well penned, keep'em coming.
i love the symphonic feel of this poem.
the cello/violin essence lingering.
i really dig that second stanza
"Soft vibrato movements
Leave me trembling
With desire "
i actually wrote a ekphractic poem today based off of Gustave Doré's paintings.
well penned, keep'em coming.
13th Apr 2018 6:47pm
13th Apr 2018 8:03pm
Why could you not post the other photo , Mi' Lady ?
Doesn't matter , this one served beautifully !
And I am in agreement with Samael , though I would add the next stanza :
"Sharp staccato touches
Designed to bring me
To full crescendo"
And howl perfect !
This is what I have been listening to repeatedly all morning !
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qew2m1UdbXk
Well done !
Doesn't matter , this one served beautifully !
And I am in agreement with Samael , though I would add the next stanza :
"Sharp staccato touches
Designed to bring me
To full crescendo"
And howl perfect !
This is what I have been listening to repeatedly all morning !
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qew2m1UdbXk
Well done !
17th Apr 2018 4:33am
14th Apr 2018 7:44am
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- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
14th Apr 2018 7:22pm
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15th Apr 2018 3:06pm
15th Apr 2018 4:21pm
Thank you so much not just for the read but the review as well :)
Always
Justafan
Always
Justafan
20th Apr 2018 5:58am
