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Alchemy
“Today I saw somebody
who looked just like you,
she walked like you do...
...I thought it was you”
and I really choose not
to coin oldendary cliches
as away to convey
the brilliant splashes
that paint you
in my mind
every time I
meet you
in those “secret places”
my, my, my
but sometimes
a classic is simply
filled with class
timeless beauty is just that....
….it last and last and last
each moment becoming
more refined,
a complex vintage
poured from a stemmed glass,
you are "finest wine"
I allow your body to open up
and fall upon my pallet
just so.....and there I go
and there is no one in the world
who has affected me
the way you do,
the way you “do me”
your incandescence,
your smile
are only precursors
to the depths
and mysteries of....
….you
Am I being too forward
in asking you
to allow me to read
your pages so soon?
…..the sexuality
that you seem to ooze,
nowhere near as alluring
as “the fluidity of the love
that you allow to overflow,
to quench a kings thirst,
that which tends to scare most”
….but never me
I am lying in wait,
poised and ready
to know of your “celestial ordination”
the fire inside that
feeds your soul,
to peruse the many
colors,
pleasures,
desires......words
….”to thine own self be true”
Published 7th Apr 2018
Author's Note
......the intrigue I've found in a beautiful, classic queen. Her quintessence flows like the "river Niger"
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7th Apr 2018 4:31am
Ooo- gosh!
Smooth-jazzy flowing ink
I hear you speak in rhythmic, melodic cool-tone in it
it's really, quite spectacular
Love the way you manipulated the italics to emphasize
Nice , nice, nice!
Love & respects,
H
Smooth-jazzy flowing ink
I hear you speak in rhythmic, melodic cool-tone in it
it's really, quite spectacular
Love the way you manipulated the italics to emphasize
Nice , nice, nice!
Love & respects,
H
7th Apr 2018 5:04am
9th Apr 2018 6:00am
The way you express yourself feeds my imagination.
The rhythm and flow that you share is undeniable.
Lucky the muse....
XO
Brandie 💋
The rhythm and flow that you share is undeniable.
Lucky the muse....
XO
Brandie 💋
9th Apr 2018 11:11am
.....Thank you my dear. I wish I could divulge the identity of the muse but that might be very anticlimactic. (that's a big hint) 😉
31st Jul 2024 1:16am
' I am lying in wait,
poised and ready
to know of your “celestial ordination” '
An inspiring write filled to brim with what art is all about. This reads like a wine and suspect it'll be even better on the second go around.
Thank you for sharing.
