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Love Then \ Forsake Me
i saw your message
written in your crimson prose
letters you had written
to let me know
now i know
just how
you loved me so
dont say goodbye
dont even close your eyes
dont leave this life
we never said goodbye
one last sigh
and then we say goodbye
why do ya hate me
love then forsake me
you kissed then left
me lost and longin
longin for somethin'
somethin' that mattered
now all that's left
is lost
and shattered
p j upchurch
2010-2018
Published 25th Mar 2018
Author's Note
this pic was the inspiration for my work:
https://img00.deviantart.net/c04e/i/2017/332/7/b/untitled_by_geistig-dpfai3.jpg
the background noise you hear -
that is the wind hitting the barn -
it's been blowing pretty hard out here the last couple of days...
https://img00.deviantart.net/c04e/i/2017/332/7/b/untitled_by_geistig-dpfai3.jpg
the background noise you hear -
that is the wind hitting the barn -
it's been blowing pretty hard out here the last couple of days...
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25th Mar 2018 9:24am
stunning.
simply stunning. the piece. the entire piece!!!!
quite an artist here!! just beautiful in every aspect!
simply stunning. the piece. the entire piece!!!!
quite an artist here!! just beautiful in every aspect!
thanks Cold Fusion
am glad you like this
was not sure how it would be received
as i felt it was a bit short
and not quite fully realized
but -
no matter how i tried to rework it
i always pared it back down
to what you see
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment
ALL the Best
jonni
am glad you like this
was not sure how it would be received
as i felt it was a bit short
and not quite fully realized
but -
no matter how i tried to rework it
i always pared it back down
to what you see
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment
ALL the Best
jonni
Anonymous
31st Mar 2018 00:50am
My is full passionate pangs for you,
i love your handwriting...
i love your handwriting...
Thank you, Sunset !!
i opened the old piano for this one -
so it's is a lot clearer - not nearly so blurry
very glad you liked this
had my reservations about it...
ALL the BEST
jonni
i opened the old piano for this one -
so it's is a lot clearer - not nearly so blurry
very glad you liked this
had my reservations about it...
ALL the BEST
jonni
