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Magnolia
The tree rests against blue
Blossoms opening
Freeing their sweet fragrance
She nestles against the trunk
Breathing in the subtle
Blush of pink perfume
Billowing clouds of soft petals
Float on heavy branches
Gracefully dancing on the breeze
Blossoms opening
Freeing their sweet fragrance
She nestles against the trunk
Breathing in the subtle
Blush of pink perfume
Billowing clouds of soft petals
Float on heavy branches
Gracefully dancing on the breeze
Published 23rd Mar 2018
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23rd Mar 2018 7:36pm
I feel a deep n delicate sensuality running in the verses. Nature is delicate n raw n beauteous..n afterall eventually destined in the fusion ..with their inherent cyclical turns on the go...simply exquisite tender n vibing positive, jeje! I love wen verses run full n uncompromised , yet in simple brevity. shine on u
23rd Mar 2018 10:28pm
A lovely paying attention, JeJe.
The imagery is such that I can experience it.
The imagery is such that I can experience it.
Anonymous
24th Mar 2018 5:32pm
Ahh, you painted the perfect image of coming spring. Relaxing and hopeful :-)
...Willow
...Willow
25th Mar 2018 2:48am
When I read this poem I imagined a young woman with short, curly blonde hair in the 1920s walking down a path in the deep south. As said by some other commenters, this poem is very calming.
29th Mar 2018 9:35am
i love the feel to this one... soft, tender and beautiful :-) i enjoyed reading
