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Against the Grain
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Mist rising from a
dawn chorus sung,
gathering light shafts
breaking on accompanying
atmospheric charged
wilderness,
senses now heightened
in the whispering reed
against the grain,
pushing over harvest hills
after the storm,
Temperate be the affection
of heaven & earth in
breathless beautiful silence,
you return once more to me.
Mist rising from a
dawn chorus sung,
gathering light shafts
breaking on accompanying
atmospheric charged
wilderness,
senses now heightened
in the whispering reed
against the grain,
pushing over harvest hills
after the storm,
Temperate be the affection
of heaven & earth in
breathless beautiful silence,
you return once more to me.
Published 17th Mar 2018
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Anonymous
17th Mar 2018 8:33pm
Rose.. beautiful.. i truly enjoyed this ink.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
18th Mar 2018 6:45am
Thankyou David xD
This & Alice a few years old
Re edited slightly fir the modern era lol
This & Alice a few years old
Re edited slightly fir the modern era lol
17th Mar 2018 9:08pm
Absolutely beautiful. I love the image that goes along with it. It helps me visualize the piece. An excellent job here!!!!
18th Mar 2018 6:47am
Thankyou eswaller
Nature is all around us so quite fitting I should involve it when thinking of my true love
Nature is all around us so quite fitting I should involve it when thinking of my true love
17th Mar 2018 9:19pm
18th Mar 2018 6:50am
17th Mar 2018 10:11pm
18th Mar 2018 6:53am
Indeed nature is wondrously spectacular
Never deceiving always there to see for those that choose to pause and look, hear & breathe in its splendour
Never deceiving always there to see for those that choose to pause and look, hear & breathe in its splendour
18th Mar 2018 6:03pm
18th Mar 2018 7:18pm
