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Beatles Sing Their Night Song - Title Haiku 5.0

   
i – i want to hold your hand    
   
hard grip plucks cattail   
dams break, rivers flood too fast    
swift the crane neck bobs    
   
   
ii – revolution    
   
pink lotus slow turn    
words swirl tongue like kanji nib    
soft lapping pond’s shore    
   
   
iii – if I fell    
   
bucking seat rises    
full tea cup spills in crashing    
moon smile's deep embrace    
   
   
iv – come together    
   
rising storms attack  
mountains rumble valleys gush    
peace at thunder’s still    
   
   
v – savoy truffle    
   
darkest plum surround    
loving confections fresh borne    
cat bends licking cream    
   
   
 
Written by Hepcat61 (geoff cat)
Published | Edited 18th Mar 2018
Author's Note
conceived for the Song Title Haiku 5.0 competition - kinda took on a life of its own...

Thank you to the fab four for their contributions - here and to the universe...
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