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Relationship
Damn i hope this ain稚 how a real
relationship is supposed to be
Happy you were to see me
At one point
Now bitter it seems
Disappointment
Almost hate
I don稚 understand
You complain
Complain instead of helping me
Fix it
This is HARD
Hopefully this is a test
I知 trying to pass
This is extremely hard
I知 trying to bear
I pray
I wish
I hope
I imagine
I dream
Soulmates are what we supposed to be
These steps are so rough and rigid
My feet are hard and hurting
My heart is heavy and aching
My mind is tired and confused
One day it will get better
One day we will be back to normal
Seems I do nothing right
I think I知 good
You think I知 bad
You think your right
I have my questions about it
This is hard
Hopefully this is a test
I pray
I wish
I hope
I imagine
I dream
I Love You
relationship is supposed to be
Happy you were to see me
At one point
Now bitter it seems
Disappointment
Almost hate
I don稚 understand
You complain
Complain instead of helping me
Fix it
This is HARD
Hopefully this is a test
I知 trying to pass
This is extremely hard
I知 trying to bear
I pray
I wish
I hope
I imagine
I dream
Soulmates are what we supposed to be
These steps are so rough and rigid
My feet are hard and hurting
My heart is heavy and aching
My mind is tired and confused
One day it will get better
One day we will be back to normal
Seems I do nothing right
I think I知 good
You think I知 bad
You think your right
I have my questions about it
This is hard
Hopefully this is a test
I pray
I wish
I hope
I imagine
I dream
I Love You
Published 17th Mar 2018
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17th Mar 2018 2:46pm
I think you may have meant to say "pass", but instead you wrote "past"(?). I really like it & yes, this is what real relationships are like. There are good days & bad days, days when you just don't seem to connect on anything & yet days when you can finish each other's sentences or you don't even have to say a word because just being together is enough. I often repeat the quote, "If we agreed on everything one of us wouldn't be necessary." I very much enjoyed your poem.
17th Mar 2018 9:44pm
Yes I was typing so fast lol I meant pass... I値l fix it and thank you... I staying strong and we got this...
17th Mar 2018 5:53pm
Love & relationships, never easy, if it was the easy concoction it wouldn't sate the thirst for long
Takes courage & strength to add
Takes keeping feet grounded but in movements
Being still as statues when silence falls is child's play fun not something adults should get to do
Love & relationships
Don't just happen when being statues
Loved your take on it and my appologies for my over long commenting
Rose
Takes courage & strength to add
Takes keeping feet grounded but in movements
Being still as statues when silence falls is child's play fun not something adults should get to do
Love & relationships
Don't just happen when being statues
Loved your take on it and my appologies for my over long commenting
Rose
