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The Mind Try's

However, it doesn't have all that it takes.
Given command it only begs for attention.
Unintelligible rants and pointless retention.
Giving such credit to the little sense that it makes.
The mind must admit, it doesn't have all that it takes.
Written by Vote4Jonathan
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Just a little back and forth with myself.
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