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BON APPETIT
My flirtatious ways, my hypnotic gaze,
THAT ... Would be your snack.
The touch of my fingertips, the feel of my full lips,
THAT .... Would be your snack.
Watching my hips sway side to side, then admiring my long legs in their sexy glide,
THAT .... Would be your snack.
Have I tempted your taste buds enough?
You ready to taste this good stuff?
Now I say without remorse,
Its time for the main course.
Start with my full breast
They are the perfect couple
Firm and round
Juicy and supple
Then follow the trail of whip cream
That’s going straight down
Its going to lead you to
A thick scrumptuous phat mound
But to get to this delectable treat
You must first spread my thick thighs
Caressing them as do
Building up my sexual high
Then right before your eyes should appear
The most beautiful pussy you’ve ever seen
As if it has cuummm
Right out of a dream
You touch the outside gently
Using only your fingertips
You just can’t resist opening her
To reveal that juicy wet clit
Many foods have been associated
With this delicious golden mound
No wonder men can't resist tasting her
Or as they call it “Going down”
Women are born with a cherry
That is plucked from her vine
The first time she is fucked
Ohhhh I remember mine
Some women call their clit a peach
Because its so juicy and smooth
And when sucked and bitten just right
Out the sweet nectar will ooze
And once you see all those juices flow
Down the crack of that plump phat ass
I just know your not going to let the chance
To lick and slurp it all up go to pass
So spread it wide baby
And you know how to lick it good
I pucker it up for you to enter deep
As I know only you could
You got me shivering now
And ready to quench your thirst
So open up wide baby
As this pussy prepares to squirt
Now that you’ve dined on the best pussy you’ve ever had
With juices that compare to the finest of wines
You will be able to recognize the absolute difference
Between a mere snack and a delicacy like mine!
Published 6th Oct 2011
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Anonymous
6th Oct 2011 7:31pm
lailapenn,
Maybe that should have been Bone appetite! ; ) A little proof reading might have helped, but other than that an enjoyable read. Like the way you opened up with the snack and then went into the main course. Thanks for sharing.
tornado
Maybe that should have been Bone appetite! ; ) A little proof reading might have helped, but other than that an enjoyable read. Like the way you opened up with the snack and then went into the main course. Thanks for sharing.
tornado
6th Oct 2011 8:14pm
Thank you. After taking another look I did find several errors and corrected them. I guess nerves have ahold of me because Im sharing my work.
Anonymous
6th Oct 2011 9:37pm
Ah, nerves do serve to keep us honest. You've broke that cherry and doing great!
tornado
tornado
7th Oct 2011 4:04am
I enjoyed this meal very much Lailapenn, welcome to DU. You have talent - keep writing.
Best regards, Butterscotch.
Best regards, Butterscotch.
7th Oct 2011 3:59pm
.....for more than thought. This was well constructed-well painted presenting a tasty pic. I'm from the old school of "Arts 4 Art's Sake". Errors that a blaring, make changes but sometimes errors that help evoke spontanaiety in the writing-to help create a natural flow, simply leave them alone. This was a great write.
