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y god
I ask god y me?
He replies Chris its u Because u have no Soul no soul at all
I say god if I have no soul what am i
God says u are a ghost of the past
I ask god what do u mean im a ghost of the past
He replies u are forgotten by all those around u
He replies Chris its u Because u have no Soul no soul at all
I say god if I have no soul what am i
God says u are a ghost of the past
I ask god what do u mean im a ghost of the past
He replies u are forgotten by all those around u
Published 6th Oct 2011
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6th Oct 2011 10:00pm
I'd highly suggest replacing all the txtspeak with actual words. I like the idea behind this piece, though perhaps a little more would be better? It feels a little unfinished.
7th Oct 2011 2:03pm
