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why are you still here?
is your soul beauty
i could tell
in wishing ponds
that wished me well
in circling paths
of a sweet nightingale
like tell- told paths
in lullabies you fell
deep sleep
harpering
the
noisy
life
jumping
off
the cliff
it was never extract
it was always right on the tack
a hundred percent
purest blood, frequent
are we ever anywhere
then we are supposed to be
lonely and free
awake and diseased
there are so many reasons why
anyone is anywhere
so many
circumstances
to bring us to here
belong
below
be strong
just so you
know
you can
be
some way
you
are
supposed to be
i have to think
not writing so quickly
i have to stop
stop breathing
so frequently
i could tell
in wishing ponds
that wished me well
in circling paths
of a sweet nightingale
like tell- told paths
in lullabies you fell
deep sleep
harpering
the
noisy
life
jumping
off
the cliff
it was never extract
it was always right on the tack
a hundred percent
purest blood, frequent
are we ever anywhere
then we are supposed to be
lonely and free
awake and diseased
there are so many reasons why
anyone is anywhere
so many
circumstances
to bring us to here
belong
below
be strong
just so you
know
you can
be
some way
you
are
supposed to be
i have to think
not writing so quickly
i have to stop
stop breathing
so frequently
Author's Note
A quick write from today
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11th Mar 2018 11:54pm
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13th Mar 2018 2:01pm
Love the flow in this one ... and how it always comes back to the breath, as we say in yoga
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13th Mar 2018 6:53pm
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14th Mar 2018 1:40pm
A breathy, spiraling effect this carried within it's inquiring message...nicely done sweetheart...
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Anonymous
17th Mar 2018 9:25pm
Marielle.. you have a powerful voice.. i really enjoy your style.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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Anonymous
19th Mar 2018 2:00pm
There is a soft touch to your style, as if reading the feathers of a bird in flight. Enjoy. Much.
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21st Mar 2018 00:46am
I am still here looking for myself by writing. I love the circling paths of a sweet nightingale, if my journey like walking on the nightingale paths, I would be really happy...
You are a dream builder, you always give me some wonderland imagination. Love reading this, and I will ask myself: why are you still here?
much love
RoseJsamine
You are a dream builder, you always give me some wonderland imagination. Love reading this, and I will ask myself: why are you still here?
much love
RoseJsamine
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21st Mar 2018 1:22am
Thank you rose, your words really touched me and made me feel appreciated in a world where I feel so lost sometimes. I appreciate that a lot :) I think this poem was me asking myself "why am I still here" in how my dreams want me to leave and fly somewhere new
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