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Forthright Thinking
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The Lady's not for changing;
An appropriate choice,
worded clearly so my intent
becoming one with your smile.
Iron of will,
Forthright in thinking,
Neither drunk on nor interrupted
by foggy flirtations
I'm comfortable with knowledge,
relaxed in its lovely aura whilst
waiting with patient aplomb till
my direction be mapped out.
My heartfelt Love for you
will never change
This Lady's not for changing.
The Lady's not for changing;
An appropriate choice,
worded clearly so my intent
becoming one with your smile.
Iron of will,
Forthright in thinking,
Neither drunk on nor interrupted
by foggy flirtations
I'm comfortable with knowledge,
relaxed in its lovely aura whilst
waiting with patient aplomb till
my direction be mapped out.
My heartfelt Love for you
will never change
This Lady's not for changing.
Published 11th Mar 2018
Author's Note
Always appropriate to show intent &
give smiles to another
give smiles to another
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11th Mar 2018 7:04am
I like how you started the poem with the line '' this ladys not for changing''
I like how this poem flows and the gentle feel to this poem.
It has a very light feel to this poem and is nice to read
I like how this poem flows and the gentle feel to this poem.
It has a very light feel to this poem and is nice to read
11th Mar 2018 7:12am
11th Mar 2018 7:42am
Rose, your author's note is just as beautiful as your deeply romantic poem. Brava!
11th Mar 2018 7:53am
Thankyou Gahddess xD
The road might appear singular in step but
the reality is far from singular
So to share the love back & forth seems indeed appropriate
The road might appear singular in step but
the reality is far from singular
So to share the love back & forth seems indeed appropriate
11th Mar 2018 11:03am
forthright
in it's delivery
is the poem.
it's gentle
and soft delivery
delivers deftly the strength
it narrates
and carries.
in it's delivery
is the poem.
it's gentle
and soft delivery
delivers deftly the strength
it narrates
and carries.
11th Mar 2018 2:40pm
Thankyou CF xD
Getting the message across to another
Oft best to be forthright so they know intentions be true
Getting the message across to another
Oft best to be forthright so they know intentions be true
11th Mar 2018 12:13pm
11th Mar 2018 2:48pm
Very true Ahavati xD
Real love doesn't change or evolve.
You can't make better what already is better, only shape it to the comfort of each other
Only my opinion though
Real love doesn't change or evolve.
You can't make better what already is better, only shape it to the comfort of each other
Only my opinion though
11th Mar 2018 5:51pm
"Real love doesn't change or evolve.
You can't make better what already is,
only shape it to the comfort of each other"
A beautiful poem, in and of itself.
You've upstaged your own work, Rose.
You can't make better what already is,
only shape it to the comfort of each other"
A beautiful poem, in and of itself.
You've upstaged your own work, Rose.
11th Mar 2018 6:48pm
