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Malice in vulgerland
Suffercating world, dreams liquefied into the rotted core, dried cracking skin, deformed melting into the scorching ground, the metallic light rusts in impurity, blinding the crippling mind,
Having to reach out to an untrustworthy cause, manufactured smiles look upon decaying trees, hoping for a force fed miracle, their vision is broken as it is bent, like a bird with crippled wings,
Hungry for a vision, that will cremate the house of broken lords
Wishing for our end, creatures of pure identities
Uninspired words from malice in vulgerland
Having to reach out to an untrustworthy cause, manufactured smiles look upon decaying trees, hoping for a force fed miracle, their vision is broken as it is bent, like a bird with crippled wings,
Hungry for a vision, that will cremate the house of broken lords
Wishing for our end, creatures of pure identities
Uninspired words from malice in vulgerland
Published 10th Mar 2018
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10th Mar 2018 10:22pm
The title of this piece pulled me straight in. If I had to share my favourite part it would be
Suffercating world, dreams liquefied into the rotted core, dried cracking skin, deformed melting into the scorching ground, the metallic light rusts in impurity, blinding the crippling mind,
And
manufactured smiles look upon decaying trees, hoping for a force fed miracle, their vision is broken as it is bent, like a bird with crippled wings,
Which is practically all of it lol. But I loved your descriptions and the dark feeling I got from reading this piece. I could even relate to the feelings expressed. This world has felt vile to me. A brilliant write. I can’t wait to go read more from you
Suffercating world, dreams liquefied into the rotted core, dried cracking skin, deformed melting into the scorching ground, the metallic light rusts in impurity, blinding the crippling mind,
And
manufactured smiles look upon decaying trees, hoping for a force fed miracle, their vision is broken as it is bent, like a bird with crippled wings,
Which is practically all of it lol. But I loved your descriptions and the dark feeling I got from reading this piece. I could even relate to the feelings expressed. This world has felt vile to me. A brilliant write. I can’t wait to go read more from you
10th Mar 2018 11:14pm
Hey thanks for reading. The world is a very vile place I share your feelings on that, there's never any shortage of inspiration for writes like this. Thanks for your feedback and kind words I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
11th Mar 2018 00:00am
intense inspirational write - got me grey matter sparking like a madman :-)))
Excellent write :-))))
Excellent write :-))))
11th Mar 2018 10:20am
