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This Bar - Abuzz
Wordy
Flurried
Flirty
Fleeting
Flattery blooms, wordy flurried hums...
These drones cyclone; flirty, fleeting bums.
Flurried
Flirty
Fleeting
Flattery blooms, wordy flurried hums...
These drones cyclone; flirty, fleeting bums.
Published 27th Feb 2018
Author's Note
Ok, I scrapped the other because this one is a true Tyburn. I didn't match the words correctly initially, but I've changed things, and here it is :) Now it's technically correct.
An example of Tyburn poetry: https://www.youngwriters.co.uk/types-tyburn
An example of Tyburn poetry: https://www.youngwriters.co.uk/types-tyburn
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27th Feb 2018 6:58am
This one rocks!
Love the theme and the thoughtful rhyming of the last two lines.
Good luck in the comp.
Love the theme and the thoughtful rhyming of the last two lines.
Good luck in the comp.
27th Feb 2018 6:44pm
27th Feb 2018 2:56pm
It's so tedious but reads amazing when pulled off.
it's the same reason i don't do haiku's too often,rules lol; " YOU CAN'T HOLD ME DOWN!"
i imagine someones butt cheeks driving an 18 wheeler's steering wheel.
well penned.
it's the same reason i don't do haiku's too often,rules lol; " YOU CAN'T HOLD ME DOWN!"
i imagine someones butt cheeks driving an 18 wheeler's steering wheel.
well penned.
27th Feb 2018 6:45pm
Totally! Its difficult to be so PENNED in (stupid pun intended).
Butt cheeks 😆🤣
Butt cheeks 😆🤣
27th Feb 2018 6:52pm
27th Feb 2018 6:54pm
Broaden your mind dude, there are bums everywhere...
Everywhere...
Really though, maybe I've listened to Arctic Monkeys too much.
Everywhere...
Really though, maybe I've listened to Arctic Monkeys too much.
27th Feb 2018 7:05pm
All the pretty visitors came to wave they're arms and cast the shadow of a snake pit on the walls. -
i loved that line.
i loved that line.
10th Mar 2018 9:41pm
I really liked this, but damn it you have inspired me again to try something new (lol)
excellent poem and future inspiration :-)))))))))
excellent poem and future inspiration :-)))))))))
11th Mar 2018 9:17pm
