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grim, shabby, & somewhat attractive ..
I'm thinking south of the river
in the seventies was
pretty grim
although,
since looking back is
momentarily very beguiling ..
Published 25th Feb 2018
| Edited 26th Feb 2018
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Not sure where 'South of the river' is; however, I lived in Norfolk in the 70's and loved it. Hope to return some day.
Amazing how we look back upon what was once considered unappealing, to realize what a blessing to have my health.
Amazing how we look back upon what was once considered unappealing, to realize what a blessing to have my health.
26th Feb 2018 8:04pm
26th Feb 2018 11:16pm
27th Feb 2018 10:30pm
South of the river here in Adelaide in the 70's was great...you could swim in the fuckin' thing, now if you jumped in your dick would fall off. Nice write Paul.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
10th Mar 2018 9:30pm
Looking back is somewhat tempting for me - but then I take off my rose coloured glasses :-(
Huge Like :-)
Huge Like :-)
