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Will you be my Valentines?  

When I think of you my heart pounds  
When I see you my body shakes  
and with each breath I breathe I feel hollow inside  
 
But when you are near me my body grows still
When I hold you in my arms my heart echoes with the  joy of you    
and each breath I now take is everlasting and pure  
 
With these words I can not explain all the feelings of my soul  
but I may only ask of you these five words and hope for the answer true
 
 Will you be my Valentines?  
Written by Nahskaved (Devakshan)
Published | Edited 19th Feb 2018
Author's Note
Wrote this for someone for valentine's day wanted them to read it first before posting it.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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