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IF I WERE A DEER
If I were a deer
I’d be so sleek and so fast
I’d search the world over
For life ever last
If I were a deer
I’d travel the unknown path
Without being in fear
Of Satan’s temptation or wrath
If I were a deer
I’d bound through valleys of green
In places in heaven
No one else has ever seen
If I were a deer
With sure footed deer feet
I’d feast on fresh manna
So tender and sweet
If I were a deer
I’d climb mountains so high
That the tips of my antlers
Would touch the blue sky
If I were a deer
Panting with thirst from the chase
I’d drink form a cool stream
That reflected God’s true face
But I’m not a deer
God’s magnificent creation
I’m just a humble sinner
In need of Christ’s salvation
Ps.41(42):2(1)
I’d be so sleek and so fast
I’d search the world over
For life ever last
If I were a deer
I’d travel the unknown path
Without being in fear
Of Satan’s temptation or wrath
If I were a deer
I’d bound through valleys of green
In places in heaven
No one else has ever seen
If I were a deer
With sure footed deer feet
I’d feast on fresh manna
So tender and sweet
If I were a deer
I’d climb mountains so high
That the tips of my antlers
Would touch the blue sky
If I were a deer
Panting with thirst from the chase
I’d drink form a cool stream
That reflected God’s true face
But I’m not a deer
God’s magnificent creation
I’m just a humble sinner
In need of Christ’s salvation
Ps.41(42):2(1)
Published 16th Feb 2018
Author's Note
This poem is my contribution for 'Your Future' challenge.
At my age, your plans for the future include the afterlife, as well as life itself. The art work included was created by me. I call my artistic style 'photo-slop.'
At my age, your plans for the future include the afterlife, as well as life itself. The art work included was created by me. I call my artistic style 'photo-slop.'
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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17th Feb 2018 3:23am
If I was a deer I would want the ability to shoot back - seems only fair :-)))
Interesting message but I prefer logic and reason :-)))))))
Interesting message but I prefer logic and reason :-)))))))
