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sandman cry boy
what is unreal
this feeling
unmade
banished dreams
crying out their little bloody eyes
weeping hollow
inside my chest
what is heart ache
sired by desert seas
chained dead weight
hunted by dunes
devoured swiftly
in sand trap silence
my expendable love
this feeling
unmade
banished dreams
crying out their little bloody eyes
weeping hollow
inside my chest
what is heart ache
sired by desert seas
chained dead weight
hunted by dunes
devoured swiftly
in sand trap silence
my expendable love
Published 15th Feb 2018
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15th Feb 2018 9:43pm
Glad to see you back Brotha ... and with such piercing ink.
This unfolds deftly ...
oddly enough, given the latest school shooting here in the states ... I thought about your piece on "Mary" as I walked my way to work. It's still the most brilliant fuckn thing I've read here on this site ... I shit you not. That's what I told myself as I weaved my way through the masses on my way to my classroom today. I spent the day shadowing and encouraging one of my young charges, who's more than a handful when he's not on his meds ... I don't want him to be that kid on the news, so I'm teaching him to play chess, and maybe write a bit of poetry ... I'll try anything to calm the voices that haunt him.
This unfolds deftly ...
oddly enough, given the latest school shooting here in the states ... I thought about your piece on "Mary" as I walked my way to work. It's still the most brilliant fuckn thing I've read here on this site ... I shit you not. That's what I told myself as I weaved my way through the masses on my way to my classroom today. I spent the day shadowing and encouraging one of my young charges, who's more than a handful when he's not on his meds ... I don't want him to be that kid on the news, so I'm teaching him to play chess, and maybe write a bit of poetry ... I'll try anything to calm the voices that haunt him.
15th Feb 2018 10:31pm
16th Feb 2018 7:33am
This, is the kinda stuff that keeps me coming back to this place, for more !
Your creativity is unique & unrivalled ~ 👑😎🎈🤩
Your creativity is unique & unrivalled ~ 👑😎🎈🤩
Anonymous
16th Feb 2018 9:37am
Love this. Sparse, haunting and certain ambiguity.
17th Feb 2018 3:38am
always been a fan of deliberate ambiguity leaving the reader the chance to use their imagination :-)))
Loved it :-))))))
Loved it :-))))))
Anonymous
17th Feb 2018 3:47am
after all this time.. .you are still amazing
18th Feb 2018 8:23am
Anonymous
15th Mar 2018 10:33am
Sent my imagination swirling reading this. A thought provoking and beautiful write
