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Diving deep
Love is like your first time diving,
You're excited to hit the water,
But when u do,
You hold your breath and close your eyes,
Just to feel the calmness of the water,
Those heavenly sounds.
When you finally open your eyes its beautiful, colorful,
But you feel as though you're suffocating ,
Body feels heavier,
Paranoid at everything that touches you,
Slowly passing out,
Though you're trying to conserve oxygen.
You're excited to hit the water,
But when u do,
You hold your breath and close your eyes,
Just to feel the calmness of the water,
Those heavenly sounds.
When you finally open your eyes its beautiful, colorful,
But you feel as though you're suffocating ,
Body feels heavier,
Paranoid at everything that touches you,
Slowly passing out,
Though you're trying to conserve oxygen.
Published 15th Feb 2018
Author's Note
This piece is about a relationship, I named it diving deep because when you're new to love you give everything.
It tells of how excited you are when its all new to you, you just dive in deep giving it everything you've got, being brainwashed about how beautiful it is,
Then...a twist to it. When you finally realize that it isn't as easy as it looks,
The relationship is suffocating you, the abuse makes you flinch at his every touch,
Slowly you're losing hope even though your trying to keep pushing on.
It tells of how excited you are when its all new to you, you just dive in deep giving it everything you've got, being brainwashed about how beautiful it is,
Then...a twist to it. When you finally realize that it isn't as easy as it looks,
The relationship is suffocating you, the abuse makes you flinch at his every touch,
Slowly you're losing hope even though your trying to keep pushing on.
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