deepundergroundpoetry.com
FIRST TIME
(A repost)
Graduated summa cum laude
newly crowned wunderkind of Wall Street
leased a big flat, bought a new Audi
rubbing shoulders with New York's elite
Sexually harassed then brutally raped
her sleazy boss will do time she vowed
she was fired, he with warning escaped
all doors shut, informants not allowed
Not able to lower her standard of living
she sells her most precious commodities
dignity, body even soul for the bidding
to sate libidinous proclivities
On a fraternity brother’s dare
he calls up an escort service
cost irrelevant what did he care?
the sex is what makes him nervous
The freshman virgin tentatively knocks
naked save her silk robe wide she opens
ruby lips, pink nipples dizzy he rocks
oh she far surpasses his hoping
She bolts the door kisses his cheek
whispers lover get comfortable
drunk on her scent unable to speak
tossing his clothes on her table
Relax handsome why so morose
sheds her robe slowly drops to one knee
limp not ready not even close
I think I’m failing Geometry
Looking up giggling what did you say?
I noticed your diploma, Masters in Finance
Can you tutor me? I will still pay
I will do so with pleasure oh king of romance
My laptops on my bed open to porn
some guys need help getting stiff and excited
find your assignment I’ll make some popcorn
between her sheets he’s relieved and delighted
So how was it stud? You know were you able…?
Oh yes my man! It defies description
did it on her bed, on her kitchen table
trying every angle, every position
I plotted her every voluptuous contour
circumnavigated twin swollen spheres
wandered lost in her sex triangular
traced crescent moon smiles so sultry, sincere
Not to brag she said she enjoyed me
without any curve I still got an ‘A’
due to my visit herself she can see
here’s the bonus, she asked for no pay
What happened to this smart, sensual creature?
I was her last john she no longer turns tricks
she gave it all up to become a teacher
teaching Math to poor migrants out in the sticks
Graduated summa cum laude
newly crowned wunderkind of Wall Street
leased a big flat, bought a new Audi
rubbing shoulders with New York's elite
Sexually harassed then brutally raped
her sleazy boss will do time she vowed
she was fired, he with warning escaped
all doors shut, informants not allowed
Not able to lower her standard of living
she sells her most precious commodities
dignity, body even soul for the bidding
to sate libidinous proclivities
On a fraternity brother’s dare
he calls up an escort service
cost irrelevant what did he care?
the sex is what makes him nervous
The freshman virgin tentatively knocks
naked save her silk robe wide she opens
ruby lips, pink nipples dizzy he rocks
oh she far surpasses his hoping
She bolts the door kisses his cheek
whispers lover get comfortable
drunk on her scent unable to speak
tossing his clothes on her table
Relax handsome why so morose
sheds her robe slowly drops to one knee
limp not ready not even close
I think I’m failing Geometry
Looking up giggling what did you say?
I noticed your diploma, Masters in Finance
Can you tutor me? I will still pay
I will do so with pleasure oh king of romance
My laptops on my bed open to porn
some guys need help getting stiff and excited
find your assignment I’ll make some popcorn
between her sheets he’s relieved and delighted
So how was it stud? You know were you able…?
Oh yes my man! It defies description
did it on her bed, on her kitchen table
trying every angle, every position
I plotted her every voluptuous contour
circumnavigated twin swollen spheres
wandered lost in her sex triangular
traced crescent moon smiles so sultry, sincere
Not to brag she said she enjoyed me
without any curve I still got an ‘A’
due to my visit herself she can see
here’s the bonus, she asked for no pay
What happened to this smart, sensual creature?
I was her last john she no longer turns tricks
she gave it all up to become a teacher
teaching Math to poor migrants out in the sticks
Published 15th Feb 2018
Author's Note
Nobody can say you have to keep doing what your doing. Do what feeds your soul.
Stunning artwork done pour moi in colored pencils on construction paper.
Stunning artwork done pour moi in colored pencils on construction paper.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 0
comments 14
reads 1029
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
15th Feb 2018 2:21am
Well, I think you have grist for a movie here. It didn't fly for me as a poem. It's too compressed and at the same time too diffused--like I said--a scenario. Where's the direct or indirect impact, the "sting" all true poems seem to deliver?
15th Feb 2018 2:25am
Thank you Sir Crier! I'll keep your comment's in mind as I write.
Cheers!
Cheers!
15th Feb 2018 3:04am
15th Feb 2018 4:59am
Thank you so Poetess! I am glad that you like it. I appreciate your words of encouragement.
15th Feb 2018 6:37am
Watched the pictures, as one who rooted for the woman was pleased to see the sequence end in a happy well rounded smile as she finds her real vocation. Agree with the moral "Do what feeds your soul".
15th Feb 2018 6:45am
Thank you Solomon! I'm certainly no fine artist but I tried to capture the look of the ancient Mezo-american iconic figures of women. A figure of worship. Thank you again Solomon.
This is a beautiful and elegant write.
The word choice is not common from what I have read here(Maybe my reading is not extensive enough), and it is quite showing a style which is unique and only belongs to you.
Love the way how you penned the woman who was so vividly depicted, so that I thought she was a real model.
Really enjoy reading it. Well written!
much love
RoseJasmine
The word choice is not common from what I have read here(Maybe my reading is not extensive enough), and it is quite showing a style which is unique and only belongs to you.
Love the way how you penned the woman who was so vividly depicted, so that I thought she was a real model.
Really enjoy reading it. Well written!
much love
RoseJasmine
16th Feb 2018 2:38pm
Thank you so much. I really enjoyed writing and illustrating this one. I appreciate your kind words.
18th Feb 2018 4:38am
Another beautifully written piece, Bob.
On par with what I have come to expect.
Don't we all remember our first, even
if we care not to. This reads as a most
enjoyed exploration, and as it turns out
one only to be experienced again within
the mind.
Also, took to heart the lesson one should
take form it.
Nicely done yet again.
On par with what I have come to expect.
Don't we all remember our first, even
if we care not to. This reads as a most
enjoyed exploration, and as it turns out
one only to be experienced again within
the mind.
Also, took to heart the lesson one should
take form it.
Nicely done yet again.
18th Feb 2018 7:00am
Thank you so much Teri! It's hard to forget one's first time. I guess I wanted to show that no matter how mistreated, maligned, and subjected to injustice we can still find our way, our place. All this courageous women needed was someone to prove that she had worth and a more noble role to play in society. I enjoyed the drawing part too Haven't mustered the courage to do that again.
18th Feb 2018 2:12pm
Take heart my friend, I limit my doddles to stick figures, thus hiding my lack of talent in such matters.
Your poetry more than fills any gap between the two.
Your poetry more than fills any gap between the two.
18th Feb 2018 3:23pm
17th Nov 2022 8:56pm
I agree with the comment that this should be a movie outline. Enjoyed it very much. Good to get an A however it can be gotten.
17th Nov 2022 9:22pm
