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live to please

God, I feel so empty
Just put your love inside of me
Make it sweet, make it fast
Yes to remember, but not to last
Yes, yes, that�s what I like
Shut your mouth? I�ll shut it tight
Relax and put your mind at ease �
As you know, I only live to please

I want you to let loose, be free
Want you to just be happy
Use me, abuse me, I won�t censure
A pit stop for your resting pleasure
A nobody, that�s what I am
But oh, oh, you must understand
maison de la dame, ouvert pour tu
And though I won�t say it, I love you

Written by arcadian

Published 13th Feb 2018

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Re. live to please

Anonymous

13th Feb 2018 2:20pm

I liked your poem very much. I interpret it as a longing to be loved. But accepting that it will never be. Never be more than a rest stop along someone else's journey. This I can relate to.

arcadian

13th Feb 2018 2:46pm

Yes, that's the essence. I'm sorry this is something you can relate to, no one should be used in the way this poem illustrates. You deserve love and happiness and someone who will respect you, and I hope you've found someone like that or that you will soon :) And thank you for your kind words!