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Bloody Tampon
rape my feelings
give them bastards of regret
little devils that can't be consoled
with fits of fury
enough to disturb the gods
in their place of slumber
amuse guilt
your favorite mistress
then drown her cunt ass
with some Jack Daniels
throw her in the yard
till her corpse bakes
play a game of ring toss
on her maggoty bones
as the worms fuck her eye sockets
she was a dead lay anyway
electrocute sanity
whose synapses are spaghetti noodles
they've snapped
now they play only sad country music
on a continuous loop
inside the madness
corrupted, rusted out justice
waves a flag of mutiny
there are pirates riding the waves
all the way to the White House
symbolizing the first house
floating in the skies of treachery
where there is a demented deity
looking for a cheap whore
he wants a date for the millennium
so he picks one up on the side of the road
singing Jimmy cracked corn
while stuffing her twat
the television talks back
the radio isn't listening
& my bastards are reeking havoc
in the hair of a blonde woman
like little nits
she scratches & scratches
still it doesn't rid her of the itch
my emotions are all over the place
there is no cure for the stripped juicy fruit gum
that intoxicated my nerves
rattling them
so i'll just go to the store
buy some tampons
& stuff them in the hole that's leaking
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 11th Feb 2018
| Edited 12th Feb 2018
Author's Note
I started this yesterday while missing Samael
you can say he inspired me :)
Copyright © 2018 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
you can say he inspired me :)
Copyright © 2018 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Bloody Tampon
11th Feb 2018 6:32pm
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11th Feb 2018 6:34pm
thank you graciously for the read & comment..trust me guilt is a dead lay..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Bloody Tampon
11th Feb 2018 6:38pm
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11th Feb 2018 6:46pm
Re. Bloody Tampon
11th Feb 2018 6:40pm
Never experienced a guilt lay.
Maybe a pity fuck. Maybe it was one of those that starts in her sleep so she loses her choice. That right there would make me not put effort into anything
,grudge fuck( wait different category)
Maybe a pity fuck. Maybe it was one of those that starts in her sleep so she loses her choice. That right there would make me not put effort into anything
,grudge fuck( wait different category)
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
11th Feb 2018 6:49pm
this was me personifying guilt making her a living entity there was no one guilted into having sex.. thank you for your interpretation it's interesting to see how people view your poems..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Bloody Tampon
11th Feb 2018 7:05pm
I dig it.
its vivid ,in your face,guilt put on the street corner to turn tricks.
it's like a guitar full stack where the volume maxes out at 10 but you still turn it to 11 lol.
fantastic Crim.
its vivid ,in your face,guilt put on the street corner to turn tricks.
it's like a guitar full stack where the volume maxes out at 10 but you still turn it to 11 lol.
fantastic Crim.
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
11th Feb 2018 7:13pm
giggles thank you dearest Samael for feeling the vibe of this write i'm you happy you liked it :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Bloody Tampon
11th Feb 2018 7:57pm
powerful use of language, imagery, juxtaposition...compelling read...glad I finally made it to the end..we all have days like that...XLNT
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11th Feb 2018 8:06pm
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence for the read & your thoughts..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Bloody Tampon
Anonymous
11th Feb 2018 10:01pm
There you go again...heel stomping leather boots level badass, my beautiful Dark Angel. You have such an incredible way of expression. I love the hell outta you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
12th Feb 2018 1:36am
thank you graciously beautiful Willow i'm smiling wide from your comment :)
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
12th Feb 2018 1:37am
thank you graciously dearest Naajir for such a wonderfully enthusiastic comment that gifted me smiles :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Bloody Tampon
12th Feb 2018 3:07am
I love this vivid irony:
'play a game of ring toss
on her maggoty bones
as the worms fuck her eye sockets
she was a dead lay anyway '
'play a game of ring toss
on her maggoty bones
as the worms fuck her eye sockets
she was a dead lay anyway '
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12th Feb 2018 3:47pm
Re. Bloody Tampon
12th Feb 2018 1:58pm
lawd
this is wholly unapologetic poetry at its finest.
great use of metaphor but that's par for the course with you
xoxox
love it
this is wholly unapologetic poetry at its finest.
great use of metaphor but that's par for the course with you
xoxox
love it
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
12th Feb 2018 3:49pm
aw thank you graciously beautiful one it means so much coming from you a poetess I admire deeply..
love you lady..
Brenda
love you lady..
Brenda
Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
12th Feb 2018 5:58pm
Jesusbleedamarycuntingfuckmeee
I'm with katja on this. I dig the title. I was just thinking to myself a few days ago what happened to the good "fuck you" pieces in this place that aren't totally garbage. (That's not too harsh is it? Maybe I'm not looking hard enough..) Anyhoo, rock on cool cat ~
I'm with katja on this. I dig the title. I was just thinking to myself a few days ago what happened to the good "fuck you" pieces in this place that aren't totally garbage. (That's not too harsh is it? Maybe I'm not looking hard enough..) Anyhoo, rock on cool cat ~
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thank you graciously beautiful Kourtnixx I love your comment i'm with you on the fuck you pieces sadly so many of our heavy hitters took their bats & walked off the field but as you've probably seen there are still some powerhouses here.. it's wonderful to see you back..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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:) kourtnixx.. I like that. There are still some, yes. Like anna and you two ladies to name an example. I'm aware I'm exaggerating a bit haha admittedly, there a few new members (or atleast new to me.. I sat in the bleachers for quite a while) that I'm really digging. I guess I've just been craving a good gag me, wreck me, leave me on the floor to help myself kinda fix that doesn't feel like halloween, or like, idk, purely daddy issue's.
I'm rambling now aren't I.. Sorry. Thank you for all the love and support you've been giving me since my return. I have something I call vulture I'll post when my submission time limit is up I think you'll love that's right up your alley as thanks ^_^
I'm rambling now aren't I.. Sorry. Thank you for all the love and support you've been giving me since my return. I have something I call vulture I'll post when my submission time limit is up I think you'll love that's right up your alley as thanks ^_^
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
12th Feb 2018 7:09pm
I can't wait to read it I hope it lights fire in me i'm feeling kind of dead today.. sounds darkly rocking.. yeah they're some newer faces here that are quite talented.. looking forward to Vulture..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
15th Feb 2018 7:31am
Oh gosh, i feel like such a jerk now lol i was 12 levels of hyper muchness and caught up in the moment you personified. I just reread vulture and it's total 2013mecrap... super duper not even worthy. Literally written as ~fuck you how appalling am I now bitches~ a product from me getting bullied and mostly shunned at a different poetry site
"I want the world to vomit on my face
cause I'm not MTV
and I want some fucking honesty thrown my way"
^ the first line haha it just escalates from there. I hate to bail and disappoint though. If you'd like I'll work on something new and let you know
"I want the world to vomit on my face
cause I'm not MTV
and I want some fucking honesty thrown my way"
^ the first line haha it just escalates from there. I hate to bail and disappoint though. If you'd like I'll work on something new and let you know
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
1st Mar 2018 7:23am
beautiful Kournixx I would still love to see your poem Vulture I was shunned at other sites it hurts I know but here just be you you're bloody brilliant :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
9th Mar 2018 4:21am
Thank you.. It's nice to have common ground on the subject. Some of my favorite poems to write ever were pieces I only posted on DP like, "Aileen Wuornos had the right idea" and, "Almost holy".. You make me glad I had the mind to save them.
This is vulture
I want the world to vomit on my face
'cause I'm not mtv
and I want some fucking honesty thrown my way
I licked the rat
from disease to rancid toe
I must say
it was so much sweeter than the shit
I've grown accustomed to
on my night's off
it's better unsanitary
mommy always said
Do you find that foul
behind your morals
and empty eye sockets?
Ignorance tends to free an asinine soul
I'd like to watch suffocate
behind pretty Facebook pictures
and an (UN)desirable body of perfection
Please
I'm so far past tangible
covered in my own piss
and the filthy pleasures
I bet you're begging to taste
'cause the illogical
smells like freedom
Fuck you cunt
Only us censored dogs
can fuck admits the dirt
we breed in
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
naked flesh
bared like wolves teeth
mangled in the blood of a goodess
I can be your goddess...
wrapped in aluminum
a resin filled beer can
discarded on the street
Shit
touch me baby
I'm sick
Im writhing
on the motel Sixxx parking lot
for just a slice of glass
donated by a couple of -----
lusting for my perfected screams
of, "I almost give a shit"
too bad for them
I moan for rape
I want to watch
snuff porn
while the vultures circle your corpse
and pick at the vulnerability
almost fucking hidden by hangover glasses
but not quite
This is vulture
I want the world to vomit on my face
'cause I'm not mtv
and I want some fucking honesty thrown my way
I licked the rat
from disease to rancid toe
I must say
it was so much sweeter than the shit
I've grown accustomed to
on my night's off
it's better unsanitary
mommy always said
Do you find that foul
behind your morals
and empty eye sockets?
Ignorance tends to free an asinine soul
I'd like to watch suffocate
behind pretty Facebook pictures
and an (UN)desirable body of perfection
Please
I'm so far past tangible
covered in my own piss
and the filthy pleasures
I bet you're begging to taste
'cause the illogical
smells like freedom
Fuck you cunt
Only us censored dogs
can fuck admits the dirt
we breed in
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
naked flesh
bared like wolves teeth
mangled in the blood of a goodess
I can be your goddess...
wrapped in aluminum
a resin filled beer can
discarded on the street
Shit
touch me baby
I'm sick
Im writhing
on the motel Sixxx parking lot
for just a slice of glass
donated by a couple of -----
lusting for my perfected screams
of, "I almost give a shit"
too bad for them
I moan for rape
I want to watch
snuff porn
while the vultures circle your corpse
and pick at the vulnerability
almost fucking hidden by hangover glasses
but not quite
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
9th Mar 2018 4:14pm
damn dearest Kourtnixx I was feeling all kinds of bad today thank you for coming through with a bad ass poem you brought me relief today..
I can't thank you enough dear one..
love Brenda
I can't thank you enough dear one..
love Brenda
Re. Bloody Tampon
Anonymous
12th Feb 2018 7:41pm
Wow crim u hit this one right on the money so unapologetic so "fuck you!" Its awesome to read this and relate Lol
I'm throwing horns and raising hell right there with ya
Love autumn
I'm throwing horns and raising hell right there with ya
Love autumn
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12th Feb 2018 9:17pm
Re. Bloody Tampon
17th Feb 2018 9:08pm
this poem disturbed me more than any poem of yours that I have read thus far :-( Don't get me wrong it is a beautifully crafted piece of work and I bow to your talent and skill - but despite comments of metaphors it still feels way too real - maybe my interpretation has gone array but this one made me so very sad :-(
sending you scottish warrior vibes to stand with you and protect you - Huge big Hugs :-)))))
sending you scottish warrior vibes to stand with you and protect you - Huge big Hugs :-)))))
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
1st Mar 2018 7:20am
thank you dearest David i'm sorry to disturb but my mind is quite dark with it's images and metaphors.. this actually was a fun write for me forgive me I do like to shock sometimes just to wake people who might be sleeping :)
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. Bloody Tampon
20th Feb 2018 11:31am
"singing Jimmy cracked corn
while stuffing her twat"
"the television talks back
the radio isn't listening "
"there is no cure for the stripped juicy fruit gum"
oooo...phrases dance in my head trip...you put the back hand on this snub snub
extra absorbant
Jeff
while stuffing her twat"
"the television talks back
the radio isn't listening "
"there is no cure for the stripped juicy fruit gum"
oooo...phrases dance in my head trip...you put the back hand on this snub snub
extra absorbant
Jeff
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
1st Mar 2018 7:21am
giggles thank you Jeff that part makes me laugh i'm glad you dug it :)
I love your thoughts and visits..
love Brenda
I love your thoughts and visits..
love Brenda
Re. Bloody Tampon
27th Feb 2018 9:00pm
I love how feelings are portrayed as nuisance persons of no value whatsoever! Easily, and willfully discarded! If only it were that easy!
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Re: Re. Bloody Tampon
1st Mar 2018 7:24am
thank you dearest Xmar yes but you see they weren't so easily disregarded ;) i'm the blonde woman who can't rid myself of the itch of my little bastards of regret..
I deeply cherish you friend..
love Brenda
I deeply cherish you friend..
love Brenda