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It will beat you down
It will bring you to the ground
Pushes, pushes, pushes
Pressure suddenly whooshes
Your mind begins to seethe
You can’t breathe
Relief, relief, relief is what you need
Relief, relief, relief, for it you plead
None in sight
Though you try, with all might
Maybe when you die
That’s when relief comes by
Till then bide your time
Then the bell shall chime
It will bring you to the ground
Pushes, pushes, pushes
Pressure suddenly whooshes
Your mind begins to seethe
You can’t breathe
Relief, relief, relief is what you need
Relief, relief, relief, for it you plead
None in sight
Though you try, with all might
Maybe when you die
That’s when relief comes by
Till then bide your time
Then the bell shall chime
Published 11th Feb 2018
Author's Note
I am not 100% sure what the subject is... Stress, life, bills, or ? But, give me hell! Critique it honestly and tear it down!
Thank you in advance!
Thank you in advance!
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