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Intentions
as intentions go
was to list 47 things
I Loved about you most
Compassionate nature
empathic vibration, gentle
patience laced in wisdom
I could go on . . .
about your dedication
to creative arts and Us
I could sing accolades
regarding your commitment
chivalrous honor thereof
A brave Spirit
in face of adversity
calm resolve settling it
There aren't enough
adjectives to do justice
Nor is it sufficient
listing individual attributes
It's already been done
sung by musicians
written by bards
Built by architects
defended by lawyers;
divided by mathmaticians
unjustly sentenced
Crucified by ignorance
ressurected in belief;
endured countless circumstance
survived centuries on faith
What could be added
or said differently
That hasn't been scribed
or recited efficiently
in poetic lines
Let me count the ways
But I can't . . .
Harvesting only positive
labels negative as tares
isolating Darkness
from the Light it bears
I cannot list 47 things
I Love about You most:
I Love all of You
intently as a whole
~
For My J on the Anniversary of his birth 💜
and Always. . .
as intentions go
was to list 47 things
I Loved about you most
Compassionate nature
empathic vibration, gentle
patience laced in wisdom
I could go on . . .
about your dedication
to creative arts and Us
I could sing accolades
regarding your commitment
chivalrous honor thereof
A brave Spirit
in face of adversity
calm resolve settling it
There aren't enough
adjectives to do justice
Nor is it sufficient
listing individual attributes
It's already been done
sung by musicians
written by bards
Built by architects
defended by lawyers;
divided by mathmaticians
unjustly sentenced
Crucified by ignorance
ressurected in belief;
endured countless circumstance
survived centuries on faith
What could be added
or said differently
That hasn't been scribed
or recited efficiently
in poetic lines
Let me count the ways
But I can't . . .
Harvesting only positive
labels negative as tares
isolating Darkness
from the Light it bears
I cannot list 47 things
I Love about You most:
I Love all of You
intently as a whole
~
For My J on the Anniversary of his birth 💜
and Always. . .
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