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A l l i t e r a t i o n
A little lie in the expression really affects trust, intrinsically, organically, negatively
Always live life intuitively. The exception rarely allows truth in our neurons
Accept love, let it trounce every rational. Alleviating timeless injuries. Oppressing negativity
Ardent lovers liberally indicate their eternal rapture as they ignore obvious niceties
A loose logic infects this excruciatingly rough alliteration that ignominiously offends nouns
Always live life intuitively. The exception rarely allows truth in our neurons
Accept love, let it trounce every rational. Alleviating timeless injuries. Oppressing negativity
Ardent lovers liberally indicate their eternal rapture as they ignore obvious niceties
A loose logic infects this excruciatingly rough alliteration that ignominiously offends nouns
Published 5th Feb 2018
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15th Feb 2018 11:35pm
You capture the gift alliteration has to offer so well, and some people might say it is a certain religion, which is what you say "Ardent lovers liberally", good work I loved it, I needed to read it, always wondered how I would express myself, great help!
15th Feb 2018 11:38pm
It was a tough write. Making the initial letters of each word in each line spell alliteration limited me almost more that I could manage :)
