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me & you
in the misty morning blue
I first saw you
your rugged charm
drew me in
& in your arms i knew
i was home
you held me tight to your chest
while the winds howled
finally i was safe
with a man who understood
how to navigate this world
i was lost
the fates blew me this way & that
being thrown about
frightened
never knowing where i might land
until you
you changed everything
with your take charge attitude
& handle your business mind
i was given purpose
to walk this journey along side you
be the fragrant flower
over your heart
a sweet aroma
awakening your senses to me
your delicate babies breath beauty
accentuating your natural masculinity
with a heated passion i crave you
with a fierce love i desire you
King to my Queen
i kneel before you
taking you into me completely
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Re. me & you
Anonymous
5th Feb 2018 8:19pm
The love is strong with you and your man, my beautiful Dark Angel. It fills the words you share here. So beautiful and devoted. I love you, beautiful
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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Re: Re. me & you
5th Feb 2018 8:32pm
thank you beautiful Willow for feeling the deep love in this write..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. me & you
5th Feb 2018 9:05pm
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5th Feb 2018 10:06pm
Re. me & you
5th Feb 2018 9:14pm
Powerful love is found in the reciprocation and participation on all levels of a relationship...this amazing poem says it all Brenda.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. me & you
5th Feb 2018 10:07pm
Re. me & you
Anonymous
5th Feb 2018 10:08pm
My love...well if this isn’t such a beautifully romantic and passionate write dedicated to the one who lies beside you...gave me chills...absolutely breathtaking....
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn

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Re: Re. me & you
5th Feb 2018 10:16pm
giggles thank you my love I was feeling the passion this morning i'm happy you felt it in this write :)
I love you wildly, passionately..
love Brenda
I love you wildly, passionately..
love Brenda
Re. me & you
6th Feb 2018 5:29am
There isn't a lot I can add to the above comments, so, I'll congratulate you on both the heartfelt write and the bliss that
obviously lead to it.
Nicely done, Brenda
obviously lead to it.
Nicely done, Brenda
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Re: Re. me & you
6th Feb 2018 2:56pm
thank you graciously beautiful Teri though not always bliss I try & remember the good things about us with writes like this..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
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6th Feb 2018 6:02am
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Re: Re. me & you
6th Feb 2018 2:58pm
thank you graciously beautiful Duende you're right I rarely right about him except when it comes to heartbreak I thought it time I highlight the good parts of us..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. me & you
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2018 11:56am
6th Feb 2018 11:55am
a version of the man/ woman dynamic exemplified!!!!

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Re: Re. me & you
6th Feb 2018 2:59pm
thank you graciously dearest Naajir I love seeing you on my pages your thoughts are cherished..
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
6th Feb 2018 8:35pm
Loving your metaphors
Wow Brenda this is what love looks like written down
Wow Brenda this is what love looks like written down

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Re: Re. me & you
6th Feb 2018 11:57pm
Re. me & you
a sweet love poem...written by the loved....the unloved know not and only dream
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9th Feb 2018 3:09am
Re. me & you
23rd Feb 2018 9:20am
a beautiful and fierce love poem - raw and passionate - great write :-)))))
Huge Hugs :-)))))
Huge Hugs :-)))))
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Re: Re. me & you
1st Mar 2018 1:41pm
thank you graciously dearest David
& a heartfelt deep appreciation for all the love you've shown me..
love & hugs..
Brenda
& a heartfelt deep appreciation for all the love you've shown me..
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. me & you
27th Feb 2018 5:34am
That's a whole Lotta Love Brenda! Love, stability and reassurance that someone's got our back! That's all we want! I do love the commitment to your poetry!
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Re: Re. me & you
1st Mar 2018 1:42pm
thank you graciously dearest Xmar now I only need apply that same commitment to all areas of my life dear friend :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. me & you
Anonymous
11th Jan 2023 3:01am
the epitome of the man/woman dynamic

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Re: Re. me & you
11th Jan 2023 3:59am
thank you for the beautiful comment and bringing this one up though as an artist I live in my imagination a lot I love this man unconditionally as he does me ❤️