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Homeopathic "remedy"
I thought I left you in my past. I thought you were my past. But now it is the present and you're a present I want sent back. I'm erratic so dramatic that it's mellow. I can't be my normal yellow fellow who's bright like the Sun with you keeping me undone. I'm chewed up like the gum I'm anxiously masticating hoping almost praying
for medicine.
Medicine.
A small bottle of pills.
Is the difference between a neurotic, dysfunctional, semi-coherent mess and me.
for medicine.
Medicine.
A small bottle of pills.
Is the difference between a neurotic, dysfunctional, semi-coherent mess and me.
Published 5th Feb 2018
Author's Note
Inspiration- illness
Credits- side effects and symptoms
Credits- side effects and symptoms
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6th Feb 2018 4:19am
Though I can not say I relate to the subject matter, if this is autobiographical, I wish you success in your struggle.
In addition, I appreciate the talent shown in the presentation. I found the word play and rhyming well done, keeping the reader's attention and highlighting the subject matter well.
A well written piece.
In addition, I appreciate the talent shown in the presentation. I found the word play and rhyming well done, keeping the reader's attention and highlighting the subject matter well.
A well written piece.
6th Feb 2018 9:02am
Yes, it's autobiographical and thank you.
My state while writing this was was, so I'm surprised that it turned out not horribly.
I appreciate the comment
My state while writing this was was, so I'm surprised that it turned out not horribly.
I appreciate the comment
