Take Off Your Falconer Gloves

Such a heartfelt tribute to a peer, fellow poet and treasured friend.
I'm sure he is smiling and wishing he could reply, to your poem,
published here for all to see the void left in his passing.

You have my sympathy for your loss.

Teri.

Thank you for your lovely, comforting comment Teri <3

AtoMik.. this is so lovely.. a very beautiful tribute.. so sorry for your loss.. i'm sure he heard these words, and knows what a great friend you are.. into my list this goes.. it's just so heartfelt.. much love, and respect..























Dave

Thank you for your continued friendship and support Dave, it means a ton. This was a blow, the guy was way too young...:( Huge hugs!

"Dog-ear corners of our pages"- the best way i've ever heard anyone say "wait, wait, wait, hold up; including Drake lol.

you say twine and you just weaved me a spiderweb of brown spun twine from a coil off of faded white  front porch gutters to the garden for my morning glories to grow and blanket the side of the house for spring; even if its unhealthy for the house a blanket of purple is always perfect to cuddle up with in the morning.

fleeing stories like the princesses bride movie

"Rapture in your final chapter" is like a Velociraptor tearing through books to eat me while i run for my feeble life

i love that you drop your hairstyle into poems every once in awhile lol, i've never saw anyone else do that and its great.

mechanical birds being wound,flying for forever

i want orange juice now.i went to Moog fest in 2011 and  saw tangerine dream live and they were amazing (i had no idea they existed before then.

taking flight

awesome song,awesome poem AtoMik.



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Thank you so much friend! I thought of raptors too, probably because they're used as examples in encyclopedias on dinosaurs' similarities to birds.

I've actually never heard them, I'll need to check them out :)

OMG! I am so sorry to hear of this. I really liked him. He was all you said and his presence will be greatly missed. Beautiful tribute, AtoMikOne. He would Love this could he physically. . .and carries it Spiritually. ❤

Thank you, yes, he'll be missed indeed. Many poets take breaks, and unfortunately he spoke of having a hiatus (much like I've tried to do lately, but I can't seem to totally stay away lol), so maybe people are assuming he's just giving poetry a rest. I had him on FB, but life was crazy, and I didn't chat with him at all in the last 2 weeks, I did however on the 11th, the day before he passed.

I might begin informing people that frequented his stuff. He didn't seem to have much activity on FB, so it's possible most here don't have him on their friends lists, and aren't aware yet.

Announce it here. We're trying to get some tyoe of legacy option for deceased members ( like facebook has ).

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/suggestions/read/9906/

Announce it here. We're trying to get some tyoe of legacy option for deceased members ( like facebook has ).

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/suggestions/read/9906/

Thank you! <3

beautiful Atomik so sad to hear Neurotic has departed
this grieves me deeply..

beautiful poem to send him on to his next adventure..

"So wind your wings  
Sunset Soar-er  
'round tangerine  
dusking dreams"

love Crim

Big, big hugs <3 My deep thanks...

so sad indeed but such a beautiful tribute - lost for words :-((

can't not RL add such beauty :-)))

Thank you David <3