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Well I've tried to get through
To you
While you tried to get through to me
Extemperaneous gadgets notwithstanding
I've got to hand it to you
You wanted to fail and you did
Leaving skidmarks of evidence
On the torn tar
And a broken fence
From afar
Hence
We shall be mended
When our stars meet
You like yours on the rocks
I like mine neat
To you
While you tried to get through to me
Extemperaneous gadgets notwithstanding
I've got to hand it to you
You wanted to fail and you did
Leaving skidmarks of evidence
On the torn tar
And a broken fence
From afar
Hence
We shall be mended
When our stars meet
You like yours on the rocks
I like mine neat
Published 18th Jan 2018
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18th Jan 2018 00:40am
dearest David this is a powerful write
my favorite of yours to date..
it made me a little sad..
"We shall be mended
When our stars meet
You like yours on the rocks
I like mine neat?
it's too bad things couldn't different..
love Brenda
my favorite of yours to date..
it made me a little sad..
"We shall be mended
When our stars meet
You like yours on the rocks
I like mine neat?
it's too bad things couldn't different..
love Brenda
18th Jan 2018 2:14am
Dearest Brenda, your flame shines so brightly that I love your wordsmith. This is what it's all really about, right crim? Words go where the mind flows. You have the ability to initiate, to obfuscate, to proliferate the meaning of your experience on the most profound level I can only go up. That you do it without a safety net is amazing to me. Thank you for your kind words.
Besos...David
Besos...David
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18th Jan 2018 4:21am
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18th Jan 2018 10:42am
No Hooks, nothing personal, I've got it all wrapped up in my head. Eventually we are all one.
Daid
Daid
18th Jan 2018 12:54pm
18th Jan 2018 4:47pm
