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M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
My friends
my friends...
Weariness begs it's
end
So I've folded
into the sheets
of real time concrete
Stalling installments
And following...
My feet
***
I'm taking more or less a hiatus. I'm still writing a little when I can, but I'm not pushing myself to produce. It's not so much that I don't have time for one poem a day or so, but the cramming mentality I've subjected myself to is causing stress. I appreciate, love, and continue to be inspired by you all, but my comments might be more infrequent. I have an incredibly difficult time commenting with feedback worthwhile to each beloved poet here, and I'm sorry for that. Reading and expressing my thoughts over each piece isn't feasible, and I regrettably must say that I'm not able to, but I will attempt to rotate what I'm able to and not neglect anyone for too long ;) Of course, I understand when I'm skipped as well, especially by you guys who have even more friends than I do. How you all manage to be present for us all is beyond me. If I were to support everyone consistently and thoroughly, I would need to give up writing myself, and I suppose I'm too selfish for that.
Anyway, please pardon me and know that I truly love you guys.
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Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 00:37am
beautiful Atomik you are a truly gifted writer
I understand about putting yourself under pressure
to write quality writing everyday you are a gifted writer
& never disappoint..
I have to take days off & I feel bad
but it is a lot of pressure just keeping of with the site..
I will look forward to when you do post..
love Crim
I understand about putting yourself under pressure
to write quality writing everyday you are a gifted writer
& never disappoint..
I have to take days off & I feel bad
but it is a lot of pressure just keeping of with the site..
I will look forward to when you do post..
love Crim
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Re: Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 3:04am
Yes, it really really is. And it's rough, all of my friends here, and tons of other people I'm not even in regular contact with are excellent writers and deserve feedback and support.
Thank you so much Crim, you have nothing to feel bad about <3 I appreciate the love very much!
Thank you so much Crim, you have nothing to feel bad about <3 I appreciate the love very much!
Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 00:50am
Bless ye, blessed sweet........let's not take this shit so seriously,,,,, but do what you must.
You are a great talent in fuckin'about wit the mindwords so bloody essential to bein beings. Whatever that does/doesn't 'mean'.......
I love you.
You are a great talent in fuckin'about wit the mindwords so bloody essential to bein beings. Whatever that does/doesn't 'mean'.......
I love you.
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Re: Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 3:06am
Thank you so much uncle Dan! Maybe I am taking it too seriously haha! :) But at the same time, people work hard at it and I'd love to be there for it all. There's a balance though, for sure!
Re: Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
19th Jan 2018 00:33am
No one here
can do it all......
gets overwhelming when you get t'where ye feel obliged to encourage Everybody.....bless ye again and again, (or else!)
can do it all......
gets overwhelming when you get t'where ye feel obliged to encourage Everybody.....bless ye again and again, (or else!)
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Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
:-(((((((( I will really miss you, your comments and your wonderful poetry :-((((((((
sending you a huge sad pouty face and 1000 Scottish bear hugs
I will miss you until your return :-)) :-(((((((((((((((
I just about manage it and I am here all day so my task should be easy but I still fall behind, like now :-( I sometimes forget that people have real lives as well - I don't yet have that problem if you cut down and only commented on 1 in 19 of my poems I would still be happy to see you :-)))))
sending you a huge sad pouty face and 1000 Scottish bear hugs
I will miss you until your return :-)) :-(((((((((((((((
I just about manage it and I am here all day so my task should be easy but I still fall behind, like now :-( I sometimes forget that people have real lives as well - I don't yet have that problem if you cut down and only commented on 1 in 19 of my poems I would still be happy to see you :-)))))
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Re: Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 3:08am
I'll still be here from time to time, but also part of it is that I don't have my computer up yet and I do it all by phone. Some days it can be well over an hour of texting through comments and messages, as well as uploading, without even counting acrually writing. So, it's gotta be scaled down. I've got family :)
I cannot hug to back hard enough my friend (alas, I'm not Scottish lol!) you're an excellent dude and I'm lucky to call you my friend.
I cannot hug to back hard enough my friend (alas, I'm not Scottish lol!) you're an excellent dude and I'm lucky to call you my friend.
Re: Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 3:16am
thank you so much for such a beautiful response - lump in the throat - but I cant cry because I am a Scotsman (lol)
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18th Jan 2018 4:35am
Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 1:29am
Follow your feet. There's nothing stalled when it is presented in its time. (hugs)
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18th Jan 2018 3:09am
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18th Jan 2018 4:41am
Re: Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 4:46am
Ahhhhh!!! I'm nuts about Gandalf, I would love nothing more. Let's do it! I'm dead serious haha!
Re: Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 4:49am
It's on my to-do list for Thursday. I'll be sure to include Gandolf (I mean Gandalf... hmm... there could be something there).
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Re: Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 6:11pm
Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 1:40pm
My friends
my friends...
Weariness begs it's
end
So I've folded
into the sheets
of real time concrete
Stalling installments
And following...
My feet
***
We heard the call
we heard the call
came running; found life bitter sweet
she bottled up the chamomile,the rosemary,and thyme
the common sage,those catnip days that lulled us back in line
we swallowed hard
unbeknownst this stranger
turned into a friend
we'll have the tea pot on for you
whenever you return again
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we'll miss you more than you'll ever know.
you came,you inspired,breathed life back into those that desired.
filled up our herb cabinets
wooden with dovetails,glass to see in
from the garden
and now it's time to hibernate for the winter.
we would far more have your writings than a critique.
no stress and many good vibes coming your way.
p.s. i want a signed copy of your chapbook when you publish still.
-Sean M.
my friends...
Weariness begs it's
end
So I've folded
into the sheets
of real time concrete
Stalling installments
And following...
My feet
***
We heard the call
we heard the call
came running; found life bitter sweet
she bottled up the chamomile,the rosemary,and thyme
the common sage,those catnip days that lulled us back in line
we swallowed hard
unbeknownst this stranger
turned into a friend
we'll have the tea pot on for you
whenever you return again
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
we'll miss you more than you'll ever know.
you came,you inspired,breathed life back into those that desired.
filled up our herb cabinets
wooden with dovetails,glass to see in
from the garden
and now it's time to hibernate for the winter.
we would far more have your writings than a critique.
no stress and many good vibes coming your way.
p.s. i want a signed copy of your chapbook when you publish still.
-Sean M.
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Re: Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 6:10pm
Dude! You just spin stuff out like it's nothin!
I'm not *gone* gone, just taking it easy and may (probably will) take a couple days off sometimes. Your encouragement and friendship means so much Sean, you've been here from the beginning, and something tells me, at the end whenever it comes.
What's your brew of choice? :)
I'm not *gone* gone, just taking it easy and may (probably will) take a couple days off sometimes. Your encouragement and friendship means so much Sean, you've been here from the beginning, and something tells me, at the end whenever it comes.
What's your brew of choice? :)
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18th Jan 2018 6:23pm
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Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
18th Jan 2018 4:44pm
Let it come naturally, AtoMikOne! A sponge must also absorb to be able to give. ❤📝
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18th Jan 2018 6:11pm
Re. M.I.A (Mikaila's Idling Announcement)
19th Jan 2018 00:38am