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Dry erase board beautiful: lets start over shall we?
It's sensual running my fingers upon bone dents
running a borrowed blade on naked skin
feeling chests
bosoms
from behind
counting
the OCD kicks in
regular count
then by twos
then skip every other one
until lovers melt on the plaid picnic blanket
merging
colliding with another's car
passengers become united
in overcrowded ambulances
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Inspired by my friend AtoMik
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/296597-where-it-ripped/
running a borrowed blade on naked skin
feeling chests
bosoms
from behind
counting
the OCD kicks in
regular count
then by twos
then skip every other one
until lovers melt on the plaid picnic blanket
merging
colliding with another's car
passengers become united
in overcrowded ambulances
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Inspired by my friend AtoMik
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/296597-where-it-ripped/
Published 15th Jan 2018
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15th Jan 2018 3:43pm
such a romantic write
in a offbeat sort of way
I smiled to myself at the ending..
"colliding with another's car
passengers become united
in overcrowded ambulances"
we do collide into each other it seems..
killer write..
love Raven
in a offbeat sort of way
I smiled to myself at the ending..
"colliding with another's car
passengers become united
in overcrowded ambulances"
we do collide into each other it seems..
killer write..
love Raven
15th Jan 2018 3:47pm
dearest Samael
dangerously romantic & sexy at the same time..
"It's sensual running my fingers upon bone dents
running a borrowed blade on naked skin"
you are the master at capturing a mood, a moment..
love Crim
dangerously romantic & sexy at the same time..
"It's sensual running my fingers upon bone dents
running a borrowed blade on naked skin"
you are the master at capturing a mood, a moment..
love Crim
17th Jan 2018 9:11pm
