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sorrow's gates
gentle sighs escape my lips
where they whisper
my life's in peril
heard by the gods
who understand these delicate murmurs
they send their love
laced on the wings of doves
an answer given
i've crucified myself enough
my penance received
within sorrow's gates
I am welcomed
tenderly cleansed head to toe
free from the heaviness of being
an all encompassing realm
it washes over my spirit
& brings emotions
I thought long since dead
my life in fates hand
I walk through the forest of enlightenment
with many paths to tread
I am ushered towards the high one
a new life is then born
of the journey
Published 15th Jan 2018
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15th Jan 2018 9:08am
As long as u realise you have been ushered by a Higher power as u say so awesomely, u r on the right track. I admire the part where u say God sends love on wings of dove,. The rest is great, as the soulful ends on positive notes so kudos.
Im quite a newbie here, Pleez do review comment only my newest, latest poem too pls.
Im quite a newbie here, Pleez do review comment only my newest, latest poem too pls.
15th Jan 2018 3:53pm
thank you dearest poetess for showing love on this write.. it's special to my heart..
love Raven
love Raven
15th Jan 2018 10:34am
To have your prayers answered like that is really special. You know that you are loved and cared for by the highest of energies.
This is a very lovely write, Raven, full of hope.
Much love David
This is a very lovely write, Raven, full of hope.
Much love David
15th Jan 2018 3:54pm
thank you dearest David as I began to write I was full of sighs.. the gods heard them answering me while I wrote..
I deeply appreciate your thoughts..
love Raven
I deeply appreciate your thoughts..
love Raven
15th Jan 2018 12:22pm
It feels as a journey
a quest for finding a higher purpose
climbing to a shrine to find ones self
a seeker of truth in the turbulance
throwing wrenches in a turbine
just to watch it destroy it's self...beauty at its finest
i feel if you knock they will let you in any door you seek
welcome you with open arms
well penned
good spiritual write smackdownraven
a quest for finding a higher purpose
climbing to a shrine to find ones self
a seeker of truth in the turbulance
throwing wrenches in a turbine
just to watch it destroy it's self...beauty at its finest
i feel if you knock they will let you in any door you seek
welcome you with open arms
well penned
good spiritual write smackdownraven
15th Jan 2018 3:56pm
thank you dearest Samael it is a journey of self discovery & of that which is greater then me..
I appreciate the love on this write..
love Raven
I appreciate the love on this write..
love Raven
Anonymous
16th Jan 2018 1:50am
Darkest Raven, such lovely and uplifting lines here..
"my life in fates hand
I walk through the forest of enlightenment
with many paths to tread
I am ushered towards the high one
a new life is then born
of the journey"
~ I am a firm believer all which happens to us is predestined for one reason or another...whether it be to learn our strengths, how to recognize are weaknesses or how much of a difference we each make...all of them are shown here...
xoxo Taryn
"my life in fates hand
I walk through the forest of enlightenment
with many paths to tread
I am ushered towards the high one
a new life is then born
of the journey"
~ I am a firm believer all which happens to us is predestined for one reason or another...whether it be to learn our strengths, how to recognize are weaknesses or how much of a difference we each make...all of them are shown here...
xoxo Taryn
18th Jan 2018 5:19am
thank you beautiful Taryn I agree
all things happen for a reason..
I deeply appreciate you seeing the beauty here..
we are born of the journey yes..
love Raven
all things happen for a reason..
I deeply appreciate you seeing the beauty here..
we are born of the journey yes..
love Raven
17th Jan 2018 4:21pm
I really loved this write from you we should always force the pace of change and discovery - I am not a believer in a higher power - I believe that higher power is within us all connecting with each other :-))))))
beautiful write :-))))))
beautiful write :-))))))
18th Jan 2018 5:22am
thank you dearest David
yes the power is in each of us
bringing us together on this journey..
love Raven
yes the power is in each of us
bringing us together on this journey..
love Raven
Anonymous
18th Jan 2018 8:11pm
This is such a beautiful affirming piece, but those last 2 lines are really the crux of it all. A new life is then born of the journey. It's a deeply thoughtful observation that I'm not sure a lot of people really think through to the end. It's the difference between making the journey and just being along for the ride. Much enjoyed this one, lovely Raven :-)
...Willow
...Willow
18th Jan 2018 8:14pm
thank you beautiful Willow yes it's the higher road that will in my case.. set my feet to the journey.. I deeply cherish your wonderful insight to this write..
love Raven
love Raven
