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Desert of Despair
When heads are swallowed by the sands of apathy,
the oasis of human kindness becomes but a mirage,
and all are destined to drift upon arid land, void of
brotherly love, and thirsting for the taste of sweet water,
a memory of what once was.
**Note...My appreciation to Taryn for bringing a spelling error to my attention.
Thank You dear poetess. AT
Published 13th Jan 2018
| Edited 16th Jan 2018
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13th Jan 2018 3:35am
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16th Jan 2018 11:27pm
13th Jan 2018 5:27am
oases of wisdom
never been more valuable
than the times we're living in now
truth
shines in this ink dear Friend!
thank You!
never been more valuable
than the times we're living in now
truth
shines in this ink dear Friend!
thank You!
16th Jan 2018 12:05pm
Nothing here my friend has not said
in many ways also, along with the
friend below.
Appreciated are your visits always
and the RL a gift treasured.
in many ways also, along with the
friend below.
Appreciated are your visits always
and the RL a gift treasured.
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
13th Jan 2018 7:15am
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16th Jan 2018 12:10pm
This reply, like an echo
of the above.
Thank you EiS, your visits and
comments always pleasing and
the RL brings a smile.
Teri
of the above.
Thank you EiS, your visits and
comments always pleasing and
the RL brings a smile.
Teri
Anonymous
13th Jan 2018 12:33pm
Beautiful write, saying so much with so little.
16th Jan 2018 12:13pm
13th Jan 2018 2:50pm
Yup, the sweetness of what was...certainly better than the bitterness of now...
16th Jan 2018 12:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
17th Jan 2018 2:19pm
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17th Jan 2018 3:24pm
Not sure about the perfect, but is better with the correct spelling :-))
Thanks Dani for the visit and kind words.
Teri
Thanks Dani for the visit and kind words.
Teri
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
17th Jan 2018 3:26pm
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Anonymous
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17th Jan 2018 8:13pm
a poetic truth exposed - fantastic write - we agree on something else - this is getting to be a habit :-)))
17th Jan 2018 8:39pm
Thank you David, for the kind review and RL inclusion. Both have placed a smile on my day.
How do you feel about sushi?
How do you feel about sushi?
17th Jan 2018 9:21pm
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