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Everything I've felt you'll never know
and every time I tried
you just won't.
      torn apart, ripped away, in my cage, here I'll stay. I just can't escape yesterday.
I threw out everything
but you were still my king
I held you high and never let you fall
After everything you'd say
I said I was okay
I was down, you never helped me up.
Because to you, I was not enough.

When I started to cry
you didn't even ask why
you act as if I'm the one to blame
Never caught a feeling like this.
I was blind, caught in your kiss.
I couldn't see past your clever disguise.




This is a roughdraft! It is not complete yet but I would really appreciate some tips. Once it is finished I will post a video!
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