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Broken
Deeper than deep
stronger than strength
tougher than tough
yet can easily break
her voice
allows you to feel safe
letting your guard down
you now feel relief
she takes you for granted
pausing your fall
taking your strength,
air,
power,
your all
you try to stay closed,
like a locked up book
her hands delicately,
touch your soul
telling your story
for you now are
broken and exposed
stronger than strength
tougher than tough
yet can easily break
her voice
allows you to feel safe
letting your guard down
you now feel relief
she takes you for granted
pausing your fall
taking your strength,
air,
power,
your all
you try to stay closed,
like a locked up book
her hands delicately,
touch your soul
telling your story
for you now are
broken and exposed
Published 11th Jan 2018
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11th Jan 2018 10:55pm
'she takes you for granted
pausing your fall
taking your strength,
air,
power,
your all'
That's a cool image. I love too the idea of trying to stay locked up. I tried that recently, but luckily for me a woman that would become a good friend, didn't let me build the wall :)
pausing your fall
taking your strength,
air,
power,
your all'
That's a cool image. I love too the idea of trying to stay locked up. I tried that recently, but luckily for me a woman that would become a good friend, didn't let me build the wall :)
thank you, i’m glad it can give off an image. Keep that friend close, they will continuously do good to you (:
11th Jan 2018 11:03pm
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26th Jan 2018 4:18am
I like(d) it! I enjoy how you used gentle notion to bring down the big and strong: reminds me of a sly femme fatale taking down a powerful noble.
