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How Does It Feel
tv's turned off
the radio's gone
online's offline
we're where we belong
hearing your breathing
feeling the throb
pulsating rhythms
doing their job
thinking I know
you're thinking of me
knowing we're thinking
we both want to be
moving much closer
bodies in touch
whispers and murmurs
feeling so much
online's offline
now it is real
I am inside you
how does it feel?
the radio's gone
online's offline
we're where we belong
hearing your breathing
feeling the throb
pulsating rhythms
doing their job
thinking I know
you're thinking of me
knowing we're thinking
we both want to be
moving much closer
bodies in touch
whispers and murmurs
feeling so much
online's offline
now it is real
I am inside you
how does it feel?
Published 10th Jan 2018
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12th Jan 2018 8:24pm
It feels just as it should... genuine with distractions cut off, only way to truly appreciate. Love this L
12th Jan 2018 9:33pm
