deepundergroundpoetry.com
By Little Things
Ginormous
in a scope of Being
Favorite cast iron skillet
scrambling eggs, buttered
toast, all flavors of JAM
Preferred coffee, tea cup
stained from use
Threadbare terrycloth
adhering to bathed skin
Old comb, plastic
faded from parting roots
Video cassettes past prime
cherished nonetheless
Worn sofa, contoured
side-by-side shape
under combined weight
Plethora of strays
curled at our feet
contentedly rescued
as were we;
wrinkled in growth
skin yielding
to gravity's pull
Foundation of bones
settling as an old house
blessed by little things;
never having Loved
nor been Loved so much
~
For my J, always
💜💏💜
in a scope of Being
Favorite cast iron skillet
scrambling eggs, buttered
toast, all flavors of JAM
Preferred coffee, tea cup
stained from use
Threadbare terrycloth
adhering to bathed skin
Old comb, plastic
faded from parting roots
Video cassettes past prime
cherished nonetheless
Worn sofa, contoured
side-by-side shape
under combined weight
Plethora of strays
curled at our feet
contentedly rescued
as were we;
wrinkled in growth
skin yielding
to gravity's pull
Foundation of bones
settling as an old house
blessed by little things;
never having Loved
nor been Loved so much
~
For my J, always
💜💏💜
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 11
reading list entries 2
comments 16
reads 1041
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. By Little Things
Anonymous
9th Jan 2018 3:07pm
OMG I loved it the first few times I read it this morning ...
... but thIs revision is PRICELESS. 💖
And the reference to rescued strays ..... WoW.
Thank you for waking me up with such a lovely poem I'll certainly treasure.
I Love You. 💜💋
💑
... but thIs revision is PRICELESS. 💖
And the reference to rescued strays ..... WoW.
Thank you for waking me up with such a lovely poem I'll certainly treasure.
I Love You. 💜💋
💑
1
Re: Re. By Little Things
9th Jan 2018 3:11pm
Re. By Little Things
9th Jan 2018 5:53pm
Re: Re. By Little Things
9th Jan 2018 6:37pm
Re. By Little Things
9th Jan 2018 6:52pm
BRAVO *screaming*
The sweet little details are EVERYTHING. I truly get this one my friend, it's well-written and relatable.
It's great how the opening word is juxtaposed with the rest of the content; yet it isn't, because the small things *are* a big deal.
"Preferred coffee, tea cup
stained from use " LOVE! ☕
The sweet little details are EVERYTHING. I truly get this one my friend, it's well-written and relatable.
It's great how the opening word is juxtaposed with the rest of the content; yet it isn't, because the small things *are* a big deal.
"Preferred coffee, tea cup
stained from use " LOVE! ☕
1
Re: Re. By Little Things
9th Jan 2018 10:26pm
Absolutely! They're the stitches holding the experience together. Thank you always for your support and the RL honor. ❤
Re. By Little Things
like the poem lots,
although you can wash
a stained tea cup,
but put coffee in it
and it's a coffee cup for ever,
unfortunately ..
although you can wash
a stained tea cup,
but put coffee in it
and it's a coffee cup for ever,
unfortunately ..
1
Re: Re. By Little Things
Re. By Little Things
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Jan 2018 1:33am
10th Jan 2018 1:32am
And thats what its all about.. such a beautiful
reign of exclusivity..
a fist pump full of love!!
🔥
reign of exclusivity..
a fist pump full of love!!
🔥
1
Re: Re. By Little Things
10th Jan 2018 1:39am
Re. By Little Things
Anonymous
10th Jan 2018 4:48pm
beautiful reading :)
0
Re: Re. By Little Things
11th Jan 2018 00:02am
Re. By Little Things
11th Jan 2018 8:15pm
Those Lil things are very big deals as you allude to so supremely serene...
1
Re: Re. By Little Things
11th Jan 2018 11:12pm
Re. By Little Things
18th Jan 2018 3:29am
such a beautiful loving scribe - I am so happy that you have such a love :-))))
1
Re: Re. By Little Things
18th Jan 2018 4:31pm
Thank you, David. I could, and shall, say the same to you, my friend. ❤ It's nice to see genuine and open Love exists. 💕