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The Empty Poem
Spacious heaven levitated above clouds
I follow up to meet my god
Doors open as it seems to welcome
I enter to drink the sacred wine
For there's knowledge to be planted
I search, and search for my lord...
Yet no table seems to be readied
No chairs set up to meet me
His majesty...nowhere to be found
Is heaven empty
Or am I alone?
I follow up to meet my god
Doors open as it seems to welcome
I enter to drink the sacred wine
For there's knowledge to be planted
I search, and search for my lord...
Yet no table seems to be readied
No chairs set up to meet me
His majesty...nowhere to be found
Is heaven empty
Or am I alone?
Published 5th Jan 2018
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5th Jan 2018 5:50pm
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2018 7:53pm
I love poems with few words that speak volumes. Lovely dear poet.
Beth
Beth
9th Jan 2018 6:59am
11th Jan 2018 1:24am
Your poem can also be a reflection of the fear people have about not knowing what the afterlife holds, regardless of their religion or lack thereof.
Great poem you've written; well done!
Great poem you've written; well done!
11th Jan 2018 1:27am
11th Jan 2018 1:29am
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11th Jan 2018 2:50am
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19th Jan 2018 2:12am
the most empty feeling to be separate from the original poet...wonderful perception in this...
-Jeff
-Jeff
3rd May 2018 6:34pm
Crystal, I love the imagery and story in this piece...I can picture showing up for a much anticipated meal with the Lord and he doesn't show. Maybe you got there too early. Brava!
