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Tears
I am drowning in my own tears,
so hard to breathe
My own tears taste like blood,
flowing from my heart
I can't breathe,
it feels like I'm suffocating
I can only hold on, hug my pillow tight
and slowly breathe in
As the tears keeps falling
Flooding ....
drowning me to the abyss of my neverland
so hard to breathe
My own tears taste like blood,
flowing from my heart
I can't breathe,
it feels like I'm suffocating
I can only hold on, hug my pillow tight
and slowly breathe in
As the tears keeps falling
Flooding ....
drowning me to the abyss of my neverland
Published 3rd Jan 2018
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4th Jan 2018 1:21pm
Good write RuNe
the heartbreak bleed through this write
the suffocation
unable to get out of bed
that first line hooks well and keeps the attention of the reader throughout.
"I am drowning in my own tears,
so hard to breathe "
great write, keep'em coming.
the heartbreak bleed through this write
the suffocation
unable to get out of bed
that first line hooks well and keeps the attention of the reader throughout.
"I am drowning in my own tears,
so hard to breathe "
great write, keep'em coming.
5th Jan 2018 3:14am
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and your kind words humbled me and are very much appreciated. Have a wonderful day 😊
9th Jan 2018 7:34am
Hard nights come but good days come as well. Hopefully those tears don’t last long 🤗
9th Jan 2018 11:34am
Thank you so much for reading and your comment is very uplifting. Have a wonderful day 😊
