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Brace Yourselves
Clenched fist
Nails dig into skin
Shivering, shaking, aching
I Invite the pain
Cracked lips
I bit the bottom
Blood pleadingly drips
I lick as I become high of its taste
Cackled laughter of maniac voices
Engulf soundness of mind
Demons rapine me of innocence
I simply remain still by its bane
Inside my cup
Disastrous rage overfloods
Yet I sip upon its contaminants
Of rotten candied filth
Drunken with damnable pleasure
Inner dark, I embrace
I spread open my arms and welcome
Eruption of lunatic rampage
I carnage through weakened hearts
Send cursed flames to swallow whole
Any trace of hope
Poisoning world with fumes
To intoxicate every creature's virtue
I giggle...
As all cower and fright
Become tainted with blood
This world is my domain...
For all that've spat on my will
Pissed on my dignity
Be aware, when I break these chains
Of self restraint
Assume your lives as good as gone
For I do not bless with such thing as mercy
Nails dig into skin
Shivering, shaking, aching
I Invite the pain
Cracked lips
I bit the bottom
Blood pleadingly drips
I lick as I become high of its taste
Cackled laughter of maniac voices
Engulf soundness of mind
Demons rapine me of innocence
I simply remain still by its bane
Inside my cup
Disastrous rage overfloods
Yet I sip upon its contaminants
Of rotten candied filth
Drunken with damnable pleasure
Inner dark, I embrace
I spread open my arms and welcome
Eruption of lunatic rampage
I carnage through weakened hearts
Send cursed flames to swallow whole
Any trace of hope
Poisoning world with fumes
To intoxicate every creature's virtue
I giggle...
As all cower and fright
Become tainted with blood
This world is my domain...
For all that've spat on my will
Pissed on my dignity
Be aware, when I break these chains
Of self restraint
Assume your lives as good as gone
For I do not bless with such thing as mercy
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Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 2:30am
Ok, u scared the shit outta me!! I'm thinking u can have my lunch money, first born, left nut...etc... lol
Chilling, dark stuff!
Chilling, dark stuff!
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Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 3:13am
Well...
your shits must've been in glee to have been released to join my damnation of world....That's probably why it got out..
I always love your comments :)
Thank you so much dear R<3<3<3
H
your shits must've been in glee to have been released to join my damnation of world....That's probably why it got out..
I always love your comments :)
Thank you so much dear R<3<3<3
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 3:11am
This is is more horrible than my "Red Chill" . Is it your dark side my dear?
"Cracked lips
I bit the bottom
Blood pleadingly drips
I lick as I become high of its taste" --This is scary... hope it's just your fantasy.
However I enjoyed reading it.
much love RoseJasmine
"Cracked lips
I bit the bottom
Blood pleadingly drips
I lick as I become high of its taste" --This is scary... hope it's just your fantasy.
However I enjoyed reading it.
much love RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 3:21am
I've always had a dark side... whilst my innocence still stayed intact,
there has always been a deeper side of me I cannot bravely let fully released in real life. Writing is my only way to let loose of these.
Thank you so much for your gracious compliment :)
Lovelovee<3<3
H
there has always been a deeper side of me I cannot bravely let fully released in real life. Writing is my only way to let loose of these.
Thank you so much for your gracious compliment :)
Lovelovee<3<3
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 4:04am
Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 4:14am
Well thank you dear wicked..
Your compliment and time are greatly appreciated..
Love<3
H
Your compliment and time are greatly appreciated..
Love<3
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 9:21am
Such dark anger is most unexpected H! I hope I am never on the receiving end of your wrath...
I beg your forgiveness for my transgressions!!!
JJ
I beg your forgiveness for my transgressions!!!
JJ
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Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 9:52pm
With careful Judgement, I'm sure you'll get around lol :)
Thanks so much for the visit dear JJ
much appreciated and love<3
H
Thanks so much for the visit dear JJ
much appreciated and love<3
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 9:51am
Wow that was an intense read Sour! Well done for conveying those dark feelings so well. Great write!

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Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 9:53pm
Thank you so much.. Your lovely visits and kind words ...
are much appreciated :)
Love<3
H
are much appreciated :)
Love<3
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 4:29pm
I can smell the revenge fuming off this write
"I Invite the pain"
"Poisoning world with fumes"
"For I do not bless with such thing as mercy "
some awesome lines here Sour,well penned. i'd hate to get on your bad side lol.
"I Invite the pain"
"Poisoning world with fumes"
"For I do not bless with such thing as mercy "
some awesome lines here Sour,well penned. i'd hate to get on your bad side lol.
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Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 9:55pm
Thanks so much Samael...
Your visit to my work is lovely :)
Greatly appreciated,
Love<3
H
Your visit to my work is lovely :)
Greatly appreciated,
Love<3
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 4:46pm
We’ve all got a dark side and yours happens to be really powerful ;)
Love it <3
Love it <3

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Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
29th Dec 2017 9:57pm
Thank you so much...
You are so kind dear lovely poetess... :)
I deeply appreciate your visit
Love<33
H
You are so kind dear lovely poetess... :)
I deeply appreciate your visit
Love<33
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
Anonymous
30th Dec 2017 9:47am
Wow! Never had expected that, but bravo! Dark & sinister. Loved it. I sometimes vent in tangle of words & vodka - hence, why some of my poems resonate with repetition. You should write more like this - it's cathartic.

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Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
31st Dec 2017 00:28am
Well... Thank you dear Rob! :)
I'm glad that you have enjoyed my darkside of mind..
I greatly dear your visit..<33
H
I'm glad that you have enjoyed my darkside of mind..
I greatly dear your visit..<33
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
31st Dec 2017 00:57am
A powerful and vivid depiction of what wrath , self destruction , and hatred can amount too . Love the phrasing and dissonant imagery . Powerful words indeed . Look forward to reading more .
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Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
31st Dec 2017 1:33am
ElrondSirfalas, thank you so much, for your amazing praise...
I am very grateful for your kind visit...
Love<3<3
H
I am very grateful for your kind visit...
Love<3<3
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2018 11:17pm
8th Jan 2018 11:16pm
the whole moment summed up beautifully - the complete picture
like a real close shot in a movie/ clarity and detailed scene.
like a real close shot in a movie/ clarity and detailed scene.

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Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
8th Jan 2018 11:23pm
Thank you... so very much
I'm glad my work was able to show such visions! :)
<3
H
I'm glad my work was able to show such visions! :)
<3
H
Re. Brace Yourselves
8th Jan 2018 11:19pm
Re: Re. Brace Yourselves
8th Jan 2018 11:25pm
You're so kind with your words! :)
Thank you.. for your visit and comment..
<3
H
Thank you.. for your visit and comment..
<3
H